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New trance with electric guitars track
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mr.eswirl
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 00:43
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mr.eswirl
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 14:51
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mr.eswirl
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 14:54
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psy stone
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 23:59
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awesome track dude....
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mr.eswirl
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Posted : Dec 29, 2004 22:16
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Thanks a lot Psy stone!! I apreciate your reply! 
Other then that I will say that this track originally is one of my first ones. I just renewed some major fuck ups it had. I think it still has some things I gotta do to it before I can finally say its done.
If you liked that track visit my site and listen to more.
Anyone is welcome.
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Mike A
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Posted : Dec 30, 2004 11:36
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Major sound problems.
First of all your bass has a hum in it, try eqing some frequencies out see how it goes.
The kick drum also sounds quite bad - I guess that eqing will solve most of the problems.
The bass & kick doesn't work together, they're on totally different frequencies and volumes, the bass sounds "above" the kick drum, and it should be the opposite usually.
You guitar is way too loud - it doesn't need to sound above everything, it should sound just in place (gets a bit better towards the end of the track).
Some sounds which you filter got too much resonance which makes them clip and distort - either compress or reduce the resonance, it will do a lot of good to the sound.
Your percussions need to have more high freqs in them, let's say 10khz and above, to make them sound clearer - it will help your sound and make it fuller.
If I'm not mistaken, some sounds are out of tune, but I might be imagining it since it all sounds like one big mess.
Many parts in your track sound just like noise - maybe it's clipping, not sure. Anyway you need to work on the levels - that's the main problem here.
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mr.eswirl
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Posted : Dec 31, 2004 01:49
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Thanks for the technical feedback Mike A ... This is a track I decided to work on again since it was made. I started the thing like a year ago and now I wanted to make it sound better because I though it has potential. Your technical tips sure should help in my opinion. I think you pointed out the exact things I could not really put my finger on because of hearing the track so much. I hear it like 100d's of times and I guess you get used to the sound settings. Anyways all your point outs will probably make it a better track so thanks. One thing I did not like is the part about sounds like one big mess.
I'm sure there is no clipping because I moniter my db levels through out my track. I always make sure all my tracks don't ever cross -2db or -1.5db max.
other than that thanks a lot for your suggestions.
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