telekom youth
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Posted : Jul 11, 2011 03:49
Not bad for first time. Should probably have more consistency. Have you heard the constant background ringing noise yet? You might want to go in and fix that.
http://soundcloud.com/tactile-one
Nice skills in there! Not bad at all for a first timer!
I unfortunately had to listen to this tune in my Apple's speakers (my audio-jack got F'd) so I can't be precise about the low levels, though the bass notes seemed well-established to me.
The overall rhythm of the mix is great. I like that you keep up the pace, changing gradually. Maybe too gradually at times. Play with some more layers. I don't really have anything to add...
Wait... around 4.36 I would strongly suggest you add some snare and later, POSSIBLY, some funky 4/4 hi-hat just to create some nuttery.