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death wish
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 09:56
hey all would like some criticism and advice on my tracks and dj set, ive finished a few tracks but will only post 2. thanks in advance for any help u can give me. ps: they are 147 bpm different style of dark
http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=29RW6VMZQ4KEE1HB3JEMME26NW
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 10:31
maybe more bass volume not much though real psychedelic but i didnt care for your snare open hihat and clap sounds they sounded muffled or eqed wierd maybe crispen them up like the the rest of you sound and id do something else with that guitar sound pattern wise but your production is pretty good your kick is solid bass is good breaks are working and your percussive arrangment is good but as this track goes on getting bored because so much more was going on in the begining sounds like ur on the right track nicely done unique style can you help me out with mine its the post that says take this!!!

thanks

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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 10:34
ya after the triplets the synth is good but the song needs more going on more breacks and changes or build it to one final peak it could really rock but the second half really drags on after awhile
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