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gregi
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Posted : Jul 8, 2006 21:19
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dtd
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Posted : Jul 8, 2006 23:33
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psytheriatsunami
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 02:21
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Tomos
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 02:39
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psytheriatsunami, any chance you could add more of a reply than a thumbs up? People expect a critique - whats good, whats bad?
Gregi - your sounds fit really well together. It's kinda dark sounding because its very 'stabby' there is something missing (perhaps a pad) that keeps the flow going in a more uplifting positive way.
Also some of the sounds, although eq'd very well, are a bit common, I'd stick some more effects on the stringy sounding noise at 2:30. The monk stands out a mile too  A bit more low end in the bass and kick maybe? Also the sample at the end is misplaced, doesn't sound right.
Overall very good though! These are just my opinions .
please comment my latest if you get a chance
http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/90964/forum/26
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gregi
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 16:31
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hi tomos! thnks for your comment and suggestions! of course i'll listen to your track and tell you what i think about it... |
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gregi
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 20:17
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nice track tomos! the rythmic elements are well done, the breaks are also very good! the bassline could have some more changes, its more or lose the same trough the whole song. the melodies are made with nice sounds but also very similar trough the song... all in all a nice track, i think a lot better as many things which are released by major labels nowadays... |
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pavaka
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Posted : Jul 11, 2006 00:38
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On 2006-07-10 20:17, gregi wrote:
nice track tomos! the rythmic elements are well done, the breaks are also very good! the bassline could have some more changes, its more or lose the same trough the whole song. the melodies are made with nice sounds but also very similar trough the song... all in all a nice track, i think a lot better as many things which are released by major labels nowadays...
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hehe.. now im con con confused with gergi 's post tomos 's post post gergi's post post.
anyways,
gregi
nice track.. and like thomos said i think the kik +bass might need a lil' teeny bit of lows..
peace
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gregi
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Posted : Jul 11, 2006 12:14
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thx pavaka.. at my home the bass was pretty loud, but my monitors and equipment in general are not really the best. hope i can redo the mastering in a better enviroment |
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