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New track, yet another progressiveish. Check it!
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Dec 9, 2013 15:02:02
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 9, 2013 16:41
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Nice tune  Sound really good and is well constructed, with enough little twists and turns to make it flowing on a dance floor - as expected by a Wizack Twizack tune. Nevertheless, I'm going to try to give you as much input as I can hear:
@1:12 - you have a crash that comes down, delimiting the new bar, but the crash it cut off really soon -> it could become a great effect if you increase the delay on it a bit more, so it fades out longer, but the way it is IMO the delay on the crash is too short and is too filtered. I hope I explained this right.
@1:39 - wouldn't you think a crash here would sound nice? 2 seconds earlier you have a "noise raise", building in the tension, and I think you could release the tension a bit more with a crash, like the noise sweep is inhaling, than you hold your breath for 2 seconds, then you should exhale
@1:54 - you have a nice lead that comes in, with the score going: root - 2 (or 3) semitones above, root again, than 2 semitones below in a loop. For this, I like to make the melody a bit more intricate, say every 4 loops change the second note.. What I would do is make that second note go up the scale every 4 bars, helping more in the tension buildup and making the lead go somewhere -> eventually until the second note reaches the next root octave
@2:22 - you have a nice stab here, that's fed into a long reverb taking in a lot of space, and I think the mix gets a bit muddy in this section. Maybe a bit more EQ to clean up the reverb tail and leave some space for the other lead playing. Also, the reverb tail could have a little something else, say like changing the pitch a bit (like Ableton's grain delay), to make it a bit more interesting.
Keep it up please post more!
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Acid Clan
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Posted : Dec 10, 2013 12:22
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Dec 10, 2013 14:12
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