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New track? Watcha think?
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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Dec 16, 2010 05:35:12
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Dec 17, 2010 04:48
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Intro is nice but could be worked a bit more.
When the kick comes in it needs more presence.
I like what happens @0:55.
Good progression, good flow.
Watch out volumes @2:15.
It needs something new beyond 3:00 it starts to get boring specially because of that background lead/arp.
After the break you basically repeated everything again and thats not good imo.
Good work but you need to work more with adding more changes/variations because I was totally bored beyond 4:00, also dont repeat a 2 bar arpeggio that much!! Its just annoying. Keep it up its a nice track overall 
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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Dec 17, 2010 07:11
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wow, thanks a lot for the advice, just the type of thing I was looking for |
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