waffleberry
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Posted : Jan 29, 2011 03:17
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The kick bass relationship was good and the two chosen and complemented well. But they could use a bit more punch/power, perhaps better compression, or if if you werent compressing...mild compression on the kick and the bass seperate, mild global compression on both to fill in the space (maximize the space). Always try to get it to sound louder with using as little compression as possible, because although it helps and is essential it has its trade offs. (Overcompressing or improper compressing can ruin the kick bass relationship, and even the whole mix of your track).
The changing patterns in the bass is a good (non linear) concept, try to get your layers to follow these changes better, it will unify your song and make it sound more coherent as a whole. I also feel it needed more emphesis on the transfers through to the changes.
Also some trippy background auras at the end!!! You're use was effective, but the one aproaching the end didnt seem loud enough. Unless you were going for a more aura style song, I would suggest using more one shot sounds, then the changes in your bass would have a bit more meaning, if you syncronyzed them.
Not really long enough for a track, more like a clip. Don't get me wrong i have more loops and 30s-1m clips then actual songs by like a factor of 100. I would worry about tweaking what you have already before making it longer, if you're intent is to push it to a longer length.
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