| Author
|
New Track-The Oracle of Thought -145bpm
|
sidra
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
22
Posts :
125
Posted : Jan 13, 2011 22:49:48
|
|
mikechedelic
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
29
Posts :
104
Posted : Jan 14, 2011 03:01
|
|
sidra
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
22
Posts :
125
Posted : Jan 15, 2011 01:56
|
|
Thanks for you kind words! |
|
|
DanielRRell
Started Topics :
2
Posts :
6
Posted : Jan 15, 2011 19:44
|
Good Work!! but I have to say that I like it only until min 4;20, (I dont really like the bass line changing chords).
all the best.. |
|
|
|
Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
60
Posts :
3709
Posted : Jan 16, 2011 02:38
|
you need some constructive critics on this for sure...
First of all you need to make some tension buildup and dropouts in the breaks, reversed cymbals and crashes, maybe kickbangs
Also in the end you have a very cool sound, use it in the track more clearly, instead of having a playaround with the bass make more sounds and stuff.. The baseline playaround sounds more like a shortcut to not make other changes and add more melody and fixa those things..
Very nice track anyhow, but it needs to get sorted.
|
|
|
|
Obelizk
Amoeba
Started Topics :
115
Posts :
836
Posted : Jan 16, 2011 06:27
|
Cool.
More breaks/buildups, and I don't know if you want it that low, but the snare is really low. I'd up it.
The bass sounds good, maybe a bit loud. The hats sound a bit slushy, raise the higher freq EQ on them.
This song sounds like it would sound good with some gated leads over everything. Take that cool pad sound, and add a cool gate over it in some areas. Or bounce it and chop it up. Would sound sick. 
 www.musicproductionnatural.com || www.facebook.com/djamoeba | facebook page |
|
|
|
Flubber
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
56
Posts :
168
Posted : Jan 16, 2011 13:53
|
Exelent Work !!
nice Groov ... |
|
|
|
minus
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
103
Posts :
1614
Posted : Jan 18, 2011 01:17
|
|
real nice work, input; walk that 3 minutes break in more nicely, it comes in sudden,, walk it in with some sounds for the sake of the dancerr.really like that 6:30 part, but u need some more sounds there to balance it,but real nice work mate cheerz
|
|
|
|
Jason Is Dizzy
Started Topics :
2
Posts :
5
Posted : Jan 23, 2011 05:52
|
|
great goa esk spacey feeling but im gunna have to agree some of the chord changes were alittle weird or off mix sounded great could of used a 5k and up boost on eq on the hats to really brighten them up but over all good sounds loved the atmosphere. keep it up |
|
|
|
alien_radio
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
16
Posts :
67
Posted : Jan 23, 2011 07:28
|
Nice track man.Awesome job with the atmosphere. Morning mood sets in nicely. N i agree with Jason on HH part. The whole BG percussion has a nice groove to it. But its too feeble n distant.
The pause is as important as the note - Truman Fisher
http://soundcloud.com/alien-radio |
|
|
|
sidra
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
22
Posts :
125
Posted : Jan 27, 2011 07:01
|
|
Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
Started Topics :
91
Posts :
529
Posted : Jan 27, 2011 07:51
|
Good sound, weird trip but nice.
I think the only thing that could make it even better is some speech samples and maybe some crazy FX´s.
Good Job!!
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive |
|
|
|
sidra
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
22
Posts :
125
Posted : Feb 17, 2011 03:00
|
|
