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New track,, some constuctive criticism welcomed

L66
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Posted : Jan 31, 2010 10:45:48
This is actually our third track, go here to listen to our previous tracks http://www.youtube.com/user/LSixtySix and here for better quality latest track


all cmments are welcomed, thanks.
L66
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Posted : Feb 1, 2010 10:24



a bit of a touch up
fractal fields
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Posted : Feb 13, 2010 17:09
hey,

Nice clean overall sound, good buildups and effects..

To me it seems that youre kick bass is not driving enough ( it shows afther a buildup,it does not seem to take off)and makes the song a bit choppy.

Unless this is you're intension i would try to make the kick/bass a bit more 'rolling' it would suit the track.

greets.

L66
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Posted : Feb 14, 2010 14:09
Thanks for the input, it does sound better with rolling bass and i touched up the kick. i re-uploaded the track with some changes, have another listen and tell me what u think, cheers.


exkor
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Posted : Feb 16, 2010 01:57

If you ask my opinion, things need to happen much faster. You have good stuff but it's sort of "takes time" to get to each good thing. You need more mess. It sort of you are saying, ok ppl Im gonna give you dark now but then you go counter intuitively about it.

Other then that the sound quality of your tracks is good.

good luck!           http://soundcloud.com/exkor
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L66
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Posted : Feb 18, 2010 17:55
Can you please elaborate on what you mean by going counter intuitively?
exkor
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Posted : Feb 18, 2010 23:27
hey,

Well when I was listening to your track I was sure you going to bomb my headphone psykovsky style. That's kind of the feel i got from the first bit of listening to your tack but then it turned out to be much more mallow then that. You just need more mess and crazy stuff going on. That's what I mean by counter intuitive, that you expect one this but get something totally different then what you excepted.           http://soundcloud.com/exkor
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