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new track, opinions wanted!
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the daleks
The Daleks
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Posted : Mar 12, 2009 02:55:46
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Elad
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Posted : Mar 12, 2009 06:12
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nice work.
the first lead sounds delay is kind of weird.
second lead i like its powerfull
not bad at all 
the more melodic part usualy is what i like and here too.. more of that please.. 
general sounding ok on laptop if it says anything..
as more we go into the track it gets better.. the start is very week compare to the rest..
if u wanna send proper demo gimme pm i can think of few labels that might be intrested.
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geekhorde
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Posted : Mar 12, 2009 06:13
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I was kind of thinking the plucked sound at the beginning needs a bit more delay, and maybe some flange or something? Not sure. Wasn't quite sitting right with me. |
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Elad
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Posted : Mar 12, 2009 06:15
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^^ agree
its totaly awsome track after the first minute. get rid of that first sound or make it sit better. maybe just replace with some line from the middle in more hidden minimalistic way?
enjoyed alot from that listen mate! keep up! www.sattelbattle.com
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the daleks
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Posted : Mar 14, 2009 04:17
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hey guys thanks for the feedback!
i wanted to start out kind of minimal and build into the track, so thats why there's not alot going on at the beginning. kind of like starting with one thread and then twining them together. i hear what you both are saying about the first lead, being a little 'quirky'. actually when I looked at the pattern just now, i saw that I must have played it by hand and didn't quantize it, so some of the notes are a little off which may be why it doesnt sit quite right. as the track progresses when the other leads come in they probably pull attention from this as they become the more dominant elements
i'll play around with the note timings and delay and repost to see what you guys think. i have to confess though, I like the sound itself and the kind of 'rubberiness' it has, so don't want to change it too much...
Elad, thanks!  check your pm
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aXis
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Posted : Mar 14, 2009 10:15
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change the intro and take cash upfront.!
wow wat fresh stuff ! dude respect. |
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the daleks
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Posted : Mar 23, 2009 10:44
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