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New track of mine: Need comments!
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Ganda
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Posted : Jun 8, 2006 17:11
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Hi all. I started making music 13 months ago. I've made alot of improvement but I don't own monitors, heavy stuff in any way.. however! plz comment and try to give me as many constructive comments as u can. And maybe slip in a few tips, remarks or maybe a positive feedback =)
Thanks alot from Sweden.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=C2E6E67534EE229A |
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Fubalone
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Posted : Jun 8, 2006 19:33
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PsyGan vs PsyOnic - Stroke of Genius 07
its a nice track.... reminds me of some chemical mafia style.. with those melodies....
i listened to ur track on crappy headphones, but it seems to be well eq... the bass sounded strong...
anyway, melodies are great... so are fxs....
its a nice track!! gluck bro
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Fubalone
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Posted : Jun 8, 2006 19:33
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PsyGan vs PsyOnic - Stroke of Genius 07
its a nice track.... reminds me of some chemical mafia style.. with those melodies....
i listened to ur track on crappy headphones, but it seems to be well eq... the bass sounded strong...
anyway, melodies are great... so are fxs....
its a nice track!! gluck bro
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Methodic Marble
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Posted : Jun 8, 2006 21:33
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weel in my opinion the sounds in the track are all well eq, and the bass sound´s good.
there are some lead´s that i really don´t like mutch(taste´s ?!),
but in my opinion what lacks´the more is a oriented story...You know?
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Mrsufi
Sufi
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Posted : Jun 9, 2006 02:20
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verry fine track dude i like those strings verry melodic thanx
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israelite
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Posted : Jun 9, 2006 10:51
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woooooow.......in one word... amazing !
for 13 months its great work
you are very talanted!!!
wich tools you using and programs? |
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Ganda
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Posted : Jun 9, 2006 11:22
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Thanks everyone. I use Cubase SX 3. Edirol HQ, Albino, Pentagon, voxengo gliss eq, q, diff distortions, waves diamond.
the bassline is vb1 with q lowpass to 10k, rbass in -25. stylus, battery, bitcrusher. But however THANKS alot for the sweet comments. I have recently bought a klavia nordlead 2, but im still not used to use it.. i mark the meldodies in cubase often. hehe, dont live record it. I like sequencing. I'm a video game music fan =) |
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Ganda
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Posted : Jun 16, 2006 00:24
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Bumping this one =) |
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Jun 16, 2006 18:52
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link's expired! reload?
 Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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Ganda
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Posted : Jun 17, 2006 01:07
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Jun 18, 2006 18:36
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Hey Nice track man!good sounds, good k&b, nice percussion work, breaks are nice but i think you could add more bits in there(?) Good eq work!!
I really enjoyed the track, its got some good energy points! 
Good Luck and keep us updated!
Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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xaBBu
xaBBu
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Posted : Jun 18, 2006 21:40
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Hi there , I find the highs of the leads in the beginning a bit too much q'ed. A reverb (just a little mixed in) or delay, would benefit the synth at aroun 0:40 - 1:00 a lot imho.
Nice melodies!!
Lots of the synths/lead are a little up front ... I would try to reposition these a little in the room.
You dig really nice into the flow of the track. A little stereo widening/imaging would help the leads to play their story even more.
Great work!!!
Enjoyed this one a lot! |
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Posted : Jun 19, 2006 12:15
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good track .. well done & thanks for sharing ! 
bom bulenat |
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