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New track, needing opinions
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Slynth
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Posted : Jun 26, 2014 17:19:24
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knocz
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Posted : Jul 3, 2014 21:54
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Nice sounds in there!
In the beginning, the LFO in the instrument pan isn't quite on time - it could be way more snappy and tight 
Also, the whole bass frequencies are pretty much non-existent  I suspect you either produce in an environment with no bass - or too much, maybe you could try to fix that or adjust based on that.. Because just giving it more subs would put this tune in another level 
Also, the final lead at 5:46 could be louder and more prominent - across the whole tune you accomplished this quite well, here it's lacking a bit more contrast - evolution.. I dunno how to explain sorry.
As a tip, trip wise the bassline continuously follows the same category - barely ever playing the same notes twice. I like this effects, it's like it bends the tune, and helps "ride the snake", but there are other contrasts out there, and some times a simple kbbbkbbb for 8 bars can really help bring out the rest
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jul 4, 2014 01:04
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Yes you lack a lot of bass, also mix isn't well balanced, you could bring perc up a little IMO, crash cymbal its too loud I think.
The track itself it's good I think, it's just not fat enough, are you using monitors?
Last section is very nice but you could tweak the background lead a bit more, sounds a bit cheap..
Good work overall, keep it up!
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Slynth
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Posted : Jul 16, 2014 00:00
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Slynth
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Posted : Jul 20, 2014 21:45
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