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New Track is up..FullOn..comment would be nice..
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Suloo
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Posted : Jul 28, 2009 03:19:03
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klippel
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Posted : Jul 29, 2009 17:45
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hi zork,
to your track:
- funny intro but in my eyes to funny for the music that comes afterwards
- sounds nice except for that one sound (so ein tröten,klingt bisschen nach kirmes)
- buildup is the weak point, try to tell a story. sounds a bit random from the order now
i would start rearranging and make it a story with ups downs, crescendos and so on..
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Freeflow
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Posted : Jul 29, 2009 17:49
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Nice stuff Zork! i like the sounds....
maybe lower the kick a little in volume, its all very puncy, maybe a little too much...
also its very difficult to get a good idea about the flow with all those fadeouts and fadeins...
overall i think you miss some more melody, pad or what ever that could add some more flavour and you could also do with some random percussion(reversed and not) hits here and there to add excitment, some things with delay on that follows the groove...
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Freeflow
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Posted : Jul 29, 2009 17:50
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On 2009-07-29 17:45, klippel wrote:
hi zork,
to your track:
- funny intro but in my eyes to funny for the music that comes afterwards
- sounds nice except for that one sound (so ein tröten,klingt bisschen nach kirmes)
- buildup is the weak point, try to tell a story. sounds a bit random from the order now
i would start rearranging and make it a story with ups downs, crescendos and so on..
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I agree to this also!
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Suloo
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Posted : Jul 29, 2009 18:24
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hm ok..thx for replys..
do you mean this sound in the end? anyway, have to give my computer away now, its sold..will get a new one on monday and this Weekend is VuuV 
So will come to the track next week and see what goes..
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