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New track for your listening pleasure ;)

offthenutboom
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Posted : Jun 29, 2003 23:08
I have finished writing this track and I wanted to share it with all of you. I only used reason Shoot me an email @ offthenutboom@yahoo.com and let me know your feedback.

The file
Arjuna - The Great Stamp of Reason

http://www.usnett.com/arjuna-thegreatstampofreason11.mp3

BOM! Voyage
Pavel
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Posted : Jun 30, 2003 16:38
Very nice i think.
The FX are way too cool.
I didn't like the second bass line that popped in the middle.           Everyone in the world is doing something without me
offthenutboom
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Posted : Jul 1, 2003 23:11
Thanks I created this track on different days, sometimes two to three weeks apart. I wanted that journey feeling as I set different moods for the each of the days I layed out the track I agree with you... that bassline is weird, so I guess I was feeling weird that day

Thanks for taking your time!

BOM!
offthenutboom
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Posted : Jul 31, 2003 00:29
Can somebody else post a review?
solipt1c
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Posted : Aug 4, 2003 22:04
listening to it right now... very well produced, no problems on that score encountered yet at all... enjoying it so far ...

more comments when i've reflected upon it over a couple of days           http://www.dartrecordings.co.uk/
PsyFire
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Posted : Aug 5, 2003 07:51
0:00-5:40
You seem to rely too much on these three elements...
1. Psychedelic wind
2. High pitch noise
3. Scratching
These elements are good but there doesn't seem to be any kind of comprehensible bassline and i think that it is crucial for the track's existence. It's as if there is gap that is not filled by anything.
5:40-end
After the sample i expected somekind of grand entrance of power and drive. although you combined all of the elements i listed earliar into one stronger segment - it's still not enough!
My final conclusion is that you have the groundwork for a decent track but you must add more to it for it to be convincing. My gamble would be a strong bassline perhaps even a melodic element/bassline.
of course this is just my opinion....
offthenutboom
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Posted : Aug 7, 2003 16:04
Thanks for the constructive criticism You are absuletly right, these track needs more work and definition in certain areas. Also is nice that you pointed out the type of sounds that are there and the possibilities that are missing So back to the drawing board with the magical sound pen to color the missing gaps and open a whole new door to freakiness.
PsyFire
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Posted : Aug 7, 2003 17:47
Feel free to PM me if you post other material in the future...

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