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CLAW
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Posted : Jan 31, 2004 02:51
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Trip-
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Posted : Jan 31, 2004 08:25
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ok...
I enjoyed the begining - although the kick is very weak. throughout the whole track actually - just need to make that kick and bassline work together.
Hihats and percussion are also low. maybe it's the mp3.
I would add velocity changes for the bassline - to make it more pump.
that heavy guitar sound - doesn't do it for me at all... plus it plays in a very questionable scale against the bassline note.
great use of fx though.
and why after 2nd rule, comes the 8th rule? kinda strange man - and what is the 8th rule ?
keep up the work.
Philip
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CLAW
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Posted : Jan 31, 2004 14:05
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Well yeah, I have to agree about the kick and bassline although you miss lots of sounds because of the format of the track in that website... Its not even an mp3, its low quality wma...
Well yeah that quitar sound might be a bit off, This is what i thought also and there isnt any 2nd rule heheheh The whole quate starts from the 3rd rule... The 8th rule is a mistery 
Anyways thanx for the words man, I realy appreciate it
P.S i have added some jingles ones in a while... Sorry about that, but u know how it goes... • Noize Conspiracy Records •
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CLAW
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Posted : Jan 31, 2004 14:51
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billy ambulance
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Posted : Feb 3, 2004 13:49
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On 2004-01-31 08:25, Trip- wrote:
I would add velocity changes for the bassline - to make it more pump.
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I woudn`t do it. I think the bassline in trance need to be less dynamic, more stable. which means - compress!
about the guitar i think u you over use it. its good till the 4 minute but my ear was screaming for something new.
your on the right way dude!
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CLAW
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Posted : Feb 3, 2004 23:20
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Well yeah, i belive that the varietion on the bassline depents from what u wanna do... In this case, I have made a bit changes in the begining but then i wanted it to be straight forward...
Anyways, about the guitar thing, prob u r right, something new could be better in a way... Ah well, Thanx for the comments and i really appreciate it for spending time to listen to my tracks...
Peace
billy ambulance your tracks are very good, especially the Puffrika, sounds very professional... Great job... i also liked the chill one, very nice!!
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billy ambulance
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Posted : Feb 4, 2004 11:41
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Mike A
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Posted : Feb 4, 2004 17:59
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I'm with trip here, although I'd add that the guitar itself sounds like a mosquito and not like a guitar.
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CLAW
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Posted : Feb 4, 2004 18:24
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