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New Track after 4month brake

D7uan
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Posted : Sep 5, 2014 17:38:03
I Moved cities and had to take a 4 month forced brake from production this is my first track....hope to hear your feed back....is the bass all right....what else might you add or remove if this was your track....thanks


https://soundcloud.com/juan_d-one/juan-done-mnml-original-mix-master



          
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RhinoCeros
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Posted : Sep 9, 2014 15:00
Hi man hope you are well in your new city i love the idea of the track and i like its feel i dig this... this could just be me but i think the bass might be a a few semitones to hi but it might jst be me and maybe if you make another track like this i think the bass or key could be lower.... kinda fatter still please man keep up the cool vibes
D7uan
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Posted : Sep 11, 2014 17:59
Thanks man I was not feeling the bass too much either, it came out too weak, im glad you liked it, I am cooking up another track with a much better improved bass will post up as soon as i finish it           
http://soundcloud.com/d7uan
Grevinsky
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Posted : Sep 14, 2014 12:43
hey dude, dunno if its suppose to be like it. But with your sidechain settings in the beginning i hear a unpleasent noise.
kick sound weak, and you got no low end in your base. i would lower it 2octaves.
Snare could have bit more snap too.
Otherwise the idea is kinda cool. More percussions would suit well to get the real techish vibe.
Build serves well but since the tune lacks lowend you loose all your power and the release gets abit weak.
So work more on the base, otherwise its a cool tune.
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D7uan
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Posted : Sep 15, 2014 22:26
thanks man, i feel that bass is one of the things i struggle on the most, im working on another track and was able to get the kick pretty decent.....I'm going to go ahead and lower that bass and experiment with that....I have never gone below F#1 or 46 hz for the bass that might just make a dif           
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Sep 16, 2014 11:17
The base is a thing that is always perfecting further on, a constant progress.
what daw you use?, I can send you a patch on how i do my bases to give you some idea´s if you like?           .
http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
D7uan
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Posted : Sep 16, 2014 19:24
lowering the bass really does get it to sound thicker, thanks....and for sure send me that patch...i use ableton           
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D7uan
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Posted : Sep 19, 2014 04:24
fixed the bass on it I think is sounds better https://soundcloud.com/juan_d-one/juan-done-mnml-original-mix-master-1           
http://soundcloud.com/d7uan
smoker
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Posted : Sep 19, 2014 12:40
sorry to tell you but you're baseline sound like
eggs on fire

i almost lose my eyers by listing you're track on headphone. (to much noise for baseline).
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D7uan
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Posted : Sep 19, 2014 15:51
lol eggs on fire.....honesty is nothing to be sorry about....so maybe eq to reduce noise....idk what would you suggest?           
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smoker
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Posted : Sep 19, 2014 19:01
just create new baseline it's sound crap.

which vsti you're using for your'e baseline ?           -------------------------------------------------
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D7uan
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Posted : Sep 19, 2014 20:15
lol all right.....i just lowered the bassline 1 octave from the first track i posted....i am using Sylenth1           
http://soundcloud.com/d7uan
D7uan
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Posted : Sep 27, 2014 07:05
fixed the bass once again it does not sound so harsh on the highs anymore.....let me know whats up.... https://soundcloud.com/juan_d-one/juan-done-mnml-original-mix-master-2           
http://soundcloud.com/d7uan
Larrikin
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Posted : Sep 29, 2014 03:07
Bottom end needs a lot of work I feel. Something is not right.
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