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New Track - a cause for concern
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bradstrongproject
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Posted : Dec 29, 2006 05:40
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Freeflow
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Posted : Dec 29, 2006 07:36
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nice stuff man..
though i hear lots of things i would do differently, aint that the beauty of it..
i like the melody, you could expand on it, add more layers of sounds, i think you should mix this one differently, pull the lead sound up a little bit..
its nice hows it dwelling but i think maybe the electro clap could be a little smoother, and maybe even change to something else, just for the sake of change... it could even add another dimension to the track, all of a sudden the clap changes to something thats more crisp and clear or a layer ontop of it, like a classic trance clap.,,, i dunno if it really is a clap or somekind of snare.. it dont matter i think you know what i mean.
maybe even add a little more reverb and some delay on the clap.
the most important is to take it a little more back in the sound picture.
yeah im getting to detailed oriented now....
the fade at 04:12 is a nice idea but the little break that comes at 04:24 is enough and this break could have a reversed swoosh to bring it back..
just some ideas and feedback from a tired soul which needs to rest..
keep it up
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bradstrongproject
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Posted : Dec 29, 2006 15:58
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thats what I came here for, good foodback, I appreciate you taking the time to listen, I def could go back to it and take what you said into consideration... once I get home from work =/
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