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fishe
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Posted : Jul 13, 2002 19:11
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Groundio
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Posted : Jul 15, 2002 18:16
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Hmm...
why all links here are broken? i have tried to listen 10 different tracks but all comes the same....not found or cannot connect or server down.
Please let me know when this link of your works. Or is it my location what mess with me now:)
Cheers anyway: Pete
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fishe
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Posted : Jul 15, 2002 20:23
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : Jul 16, 2002 02:20
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your kick sound is great.
the bassline needs some more EQ and lose the delay or chorus, either of them makes it offbeat and low in volume.
those scratchy ts404 lines are not on beat, and that makes your track sound a bit out of tune. the percussion work is good, some more EQ on the OHH's. try adding a CHH line as well, to work as an extra groove loop.
your break from 4:10 approx to 5:00 is good, but the entrence has no surprise. try adding an element, like a movie sample or a kickroll.
next, more sounds on 5:00 and so forth would be nice. i would guess that would be your peak moment in the track, so it would need some more body to it.
it's a nice track over all, but you need to work on your sound, and on the story your trying to tell through the track, because it's there, somewhere.
keep it up.
"We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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fishe
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Posted : Jul 16, 2002 19:11
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Hey!
Thx for the comments! |
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