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Hydro_Ponneh
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Posted : May 30, 2016 17:39:45
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Hi all,
I am new to the producing scene and would like you guys to give me some feedback, no matter how harsh haha!
I am from South Africa CT and I am teaching myself everything from the start, with here and there youtube vids.
Anyway please let me know what you guys think, I know it sounds horrible but I feel like I am heading somewhat in the right direction...
Here is my latest track
https://soundcloud.com/ponchos-1/dimensional-wolf-pack
Thanks in advanced!
P>L>U>R
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knocz
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Posted : May 30, 2016 18:04
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Hi!
We have a section for getting feedback, The Workshop  http://forum.isratrance.com/forum-the-workshop/
(I'll move this thread there after some time to see this response, so your thread doesn't "disappear"  )
Cool tune I think the kick is a bit boomy, and generally the tune is sounding a bit crude and raw, especially on the leads.. but the more you do the more you learn, and the more you get done - in the end you get better
keep it up, finish this ASAP and move on to the next one, good job 
 Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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Hydro_Ponneh
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Posted : May 30, 2016 18:12
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Apologies for posting in the wrong section you can move ahead 
Thanks for the feedback. I will definitely continue working on it, i know it sounds harsh and there's a lot that can be done to it again thanks for the criticism! |
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Hydro_Ponneh
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Posted : Aug 2, 2016 16:11
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Hello all!
I am back with a new track I have been working on the past two months. I call it Cosmic Grrrr. I was trying a dark psy mending into a funky up beat but some of my friends say I should stick to dark, which I don't mind because it's my fav!
I am still learning a lot with producing mixing and mastering, like before any feedback would be great!
Thanks a lot guys!
https://soundcloud.com/ponchos-1/cosmic-grrrr |
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RhinoCeros
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 5, 2016 13:59
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dimensional-wolf-pack really nice song and idea. At 3:40 the break or the fade out does not feel good to me. Maybe add a little more or a extra howl Keep going not bad at all
Peace - Love - Light and Harmony :) |
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