knocz
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Posted : Oct 19, 2010 13:39
Hi!
I think the track is great (the second link) until 3:11. Nice and boomy, great vibes... But then it got lost. I like the change in the bass from 3/4 to 4/4, but I would put a KbbbKbbb there, with something like this: KbBbKbbBKbBbKbBB (where 'b' represents the normal bass note and 'B' a bass note with a different pitch, sometimes up one full octave).
I don't know if you really want to have that confuseness, but the track got lost from there on..
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Oikeusjyva
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Posted : Oct 21, 2010 09:30
to be honest i wanted to fuck up the track totally after the 3/4 part.. thats the reason for the mess
Maine Coon
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Posted : Oct 21, 2010 18:51
I liked it until the last 1-2 minutes. It just started to sound like you got bored with writing and decided to wrap things up with a vinyl playing at 78 RPM. It made for a rather abrupt ending too. The 3/4 part, the transition to 4/4 and the beginning of 4/4 was killargh, introduction of messiness was cool too. But then it started sounding like you gave up thinking about this track in the end. I think with a more thought-through ending it could be an awesome track
loki
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Posted : Oct 24, 2010 07:33
ha! bastard! you stole that main lead in the first half out of a diddy i wrote on guitar when i was a wee lad!
no really, though, most of this made me want to dance. i agree with others about the ending, though, it's a bit more hectic and doesn't hold my interest the same way. from about 4:10 onwards.
Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
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Upavas
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Posted : Nov 4, 2010 02:58
Very nice !
I also think the first part is absolutely rox, the second fast part was nice, but felt almost like a different track. Would be nice to get a version with only the first part!
