Redshift
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Posted : Aug 2, 2011 14:56:25
Hey all,
I have been working on this song for a while and would really appreciate some feedback.
This one is a bit slower - 140bpm. Maybe something for when the sun comes up...
Thanks
Andre
João Pedro Veiga
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Posted : Aug 2, 2011 16:45
I think it's great. The production is swell and the originality is there.
I would bring the snare up, though. Can't barely hear it.
Nice work, Andre.
jekvan
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Posted : Aug 2, 2011 19:32
I like the concept,good sounds.
Couple of things I notice :
First of all,the kick is down in the mix,there are moments when you can't even hear it.And at some points,same with the snare.
The energy levels aren't rising,and then decreasing and whatnot.The difference between lowest and highest point is the presence of arpegiated lead.Also,you run the same three notes chord for many bars dude,trance and all that,but come on.
I find myself many times actually snap out of it in the dance flour cause the tune is repetitive much.And many folks around me as well,give the music some respect after all.
Hook is good when it is short.Lick as awesome when it is out of the order.Riff is the shit when you don't over do it.
And the last,transitions,work on them to be more smooth.
Besides that,why not,good stuff right here.
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