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New song almost complete, I want your opinions
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dija
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Posted : Feb 23, 2007 18:37
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dija
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Posted : Feb 23, 2007 19:23
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I tried to edit my previous post but it wont let me, now it lets me edit but I can 't delete this one hehe but I have just found 2 problems by listening on a friends system.
The snare is somewhat hidden in the mix, and the bassdrum loses power on the fourth beat sometimes.
Also near the end after the conga break down it kind of drags and doesn't have the impact it should. I have a lead that goes there but for some reason I took it out  |
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shroomhunters
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Posted : Feb 24, 2007 10:17
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not a big fan of proggy and minimal...but here goes,the snare definitely needs to be cranked up in the mix,i found the bass a bit loud,and like u said u need another lead coz the pads just go on too long,makin it a bit monotonous,a few more backing bits would make it less tiring to hear....but keep it up mate we get thrashed all the time....cheers
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ctrl+alt+del
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Posted : Feb 24, 2007 10:18
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Nice progressive feel. I like the bassline - nice envelopes - gives it a very tight feel. Although you might want to try to add some compression on the low-frequencies to remove the "muddy" feel.
Also the gated synth pad is ethereal. Nice timbre - but it goes on for too long and keeps coming back without any variation - try mixing it up a bit.
The snares need boosting of the mid-high range frequencies - maybe add some quality reverbs that'll make them fly out. Even some filtering would go well like Camel Space/Phat.
I'd like to hear a lot more sounds to create a "wall". That consumes the listener and keeps the track interesting - just a suggestion 
Besides that, everything's great - good percussion, bass and synth layering!
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mr_wise
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Posted : Feb 24, 2007 20:55
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great track mate, dynamic all the way which is good, its important to keep interest all along the track (;
good bassline what else can i say?!!!
oh.. good luck (; |
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PSYSTUFF
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Posted : Feb 25, 2007 15:09
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Very good and realy strong progressive tune  ,good work man, i like this groove . keep it up...........
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bandarlog
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Posted : Feb 25, 2007 18:06
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2007 23:21
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Dude I really liked your track!
Cant add many things but you have some talents
good lucks
Misha
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alienzo
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Posted : Feb 26, 2007 08:56
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Hi dija 
Great trak !
I really enjoyed it
Not much 2 say on my behalf except bBboOoMm
Keep bBboOoMming !
Always great to hear the nice progressive sound
P/L/U/R |
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Feb 26, 2007 18:48
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So man your sounds are really good.Nice melodies.
Didnt like your bass.You can make it deeper and fix the hold.In the begging the voice going with the bass and kick is out of tone.I dunno what you done but the voice is slower.But you have very good elements in your track and all the other sounds are going good
Thats from me.
All the best. |
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dija
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Posted : Feb 26, 2007 19:49
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Hmmm, can you be more clear please? It sounds to me like the bass is out of key. I can't find an explanation for it though the bass is not detuned and its playing the root.
It sounds like your saying that the voice synth is out of tune?(I also can't find a reason for this) You also say it changes speed?
Unless there's something happening I don't know about. The voice plays the same all the time. I just thought that maybe the other instruments coming in gave the impression that it was speeding up.
Also, when you say fix the "hold". What are you referring to? You think I should adjust the length of the bass notes. If so you are thinking they should be longer or shorter?
I'm going to load up a tuning program to verify that they are infact intune. I think I will just have to replace that bass there with something else. Perhaps the envelope on the bass when its played sustained notes like that creates some conflict and makes it sound out of tune. |
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Feb 26, 2007 23:06
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So my friend.About the voice and tha bass in the beggining..The kick and bass are not going with the tempo like voice going.Thats what i mean.About the hold to the bass.Let the length of the bass the same.Just change the hold from the vst you use for the bass.i dont know if you are understand me and sorry for my bad english.
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Mar 3, 2007 14:42
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downloading..... =D |
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Mar 3, 2007 15:05
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nice track! i liked it.. keep going! |
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