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secretside
Secret Side
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Posted : Aug 27, 2004 02:54
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secretside
Secret Side
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Posted : Aug 27, 2004 23:00
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no comment ?
so this track may be perfect looool 
please write some words about it ! 
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Sektor666
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Posted : Aug 27, 2004 23:32
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give me a reason to think that FX in start enter the bass and kick well ?
melody that enters is very nice ...... i would add some high notes at it's ends ....... bass notes not so fit all the idea ..... more FX neeeded .......
you feel breaks well ........
but more FX needed and less reverb on melodies it makes them less natural .....
pretty nice FX melody conversation at 2:30
you feel music well ...... but subjects change to extreme , make it more chill structive easy easy to main of track which is melody at 5min ...............
good exit from this melody ....... more FX again
more FX play with melody...........
overall nice ........
why i like it (objective)
catchy melody , nice FX melody play (in place i said) .... not much agression and commercionalizm .....
why i don't like it (objective)
need more groove and intresting one
more FX to make it full and not empty basis
sometimes too destructive
i think if you use my suggestions you can release it ,coz it's nice to hear and dance.... |
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PsyGoatDelic
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 28, 2004 00:28
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i liked the leads that gets in :55 nice breaks
and i really loved golom voice  that track got some grove keep it up! i hear the same bassline i heard in the last track i reviewed its really not my taste that bass line. great break in 3:50!!! and even a better enter...
well done mate!!!
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secretside
Secret Side
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Posted : Aug 29, 2004 12:45
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thx for your comments
i'll test a new bass sound on this track
> sektor i'll test what you say
boom
ps other comments are welcome |
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Section Divine
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 29, 2004 15:17
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Great tune, i thing i've understood what u wanted to say.
only thing is kick and bassline, that should be more low and groovy imo, to make the whole sounding more complex. and some more fx will be ok also, as sector wrote.
want to hear more from you...
good luck |
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Fulis
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Posted : Sep 1, 2004 03:31
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Really great track. Like the dark tunes and the floating feeling=)
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Chemical Reaction
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Posted : Sep 1, 2004 18:40
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This is a great track! I think the energy is there. The first few minutes are amazing, my only complaint is it may get a little repeticious towards the end of the track. Great job, I always like your tracks this may be your best yet. Keep working! Boom
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secretside
Secret Side
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Posted : Sep 3, 2004 15:31
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thanks man i'll work on the next one now !
BoOm |
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Pavel
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Posted : Sep 4, 2004 18:39
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I pretty much like the beginning!
Finish it, don't give up!
 Everyone in the world is doing something without me |
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secretside
Secret Side
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Posted : Sep 12, 2004 19:39
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thx man |
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Qualium
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 18:30
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Hmm,
Not really to my taste - I prefer something a bit more minimal, subtle, but lively in a funky, more with less, sense, however ...
I like your sense of overall stuctural flow; everything seems pretty well placed in the arrangement; the track is greater than the sum of its parts, but I find the parts themselves a bit repetitive; the lead and the bass at ~4:40 don't fit together harmonically. I'd explore a few more sounds - maybe break up the lead a bit more, do a few variations on the timbral, melodic, and rhythmic themes; create a bit more musical space with a bit more contrast. Dunno, jut a few vague ideas of mine for what they're worth. Keep it up tho.
Find my music here - www.soundclick.com/bands/0/qualiummusic.htm |
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