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Posted : Oct 11, 2011 17:30:33
namaste, here is a progressive kindo bounce , the track is nearly complete, any kind of feedback/ input would be highly appreciated.hope to hear some words from u doodz,
bomz and cheerz
Wicked sound System
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 08:42
Firstly Nice quality sound . what do you use ( which sound card , monitors ? )
Nice Groove in the start . some progression on it would be good , but it end up into another break , with the fm lead comming in , the break sounds like you are trying to reconstruct Osom style Break ..from the track Berg sturtz ( va peace for the wicked ) , same melody with same sound with almost same kick pattern .
the percussion on this and a lil befor this are really messy . esppecially whne it starts working with teh click ( or a clap isit ? ) on the kick .
the fm lead ( kddish) has a nice pattern to it . but again there is no progression , everyhting from the bass , percs , patterns , everyhting remains same until it fades into the farty sound ( which can also be usued earlier as all sounds are very hi pitched at the start )
nice effect with the bass at 4.57 .
you have a nice selections of sounds here, but the problem is none of them are communication with each other , at some points like 2.40 Ish , theya re all doing their own thing causing distraction . what you really need here is more disiplin with your arrangement . over all nice ideas , but it sure sounds more experimental , so keep going until you find a strong direction .
best luck ..Bom !
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 11:24
I agree with Wicked sound System..
Although this is not my style, I like the sound quality of the leads and also like some ideas you have there.
On the other hand, my overall appreciation is that it's a boring track (sorry, but have to be honest since I like people to be with me aswell).
Keep working and you'll get there for sure
Cheers
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 20:01
i also agree,this is a old track,and not the kind of music i genreally make, so yea it is all experimental,,i got me a RME soundcard, got myself dynaudio bm6'a,, got a novation sl mkii midi cunt, on cubase wil a few vst's, some label wanted this old track for a free release, and i just finished it off in a hurry, and even i'm not reallly happy with the ending and some parts in it, but the label guys like it, so its ok for free release,, but i 'll keep ur points in mind,, for the new works, thx for all the input, it give me a positive perspective on what i am doing, and what needs to be done, cheerz again homz
bomz
faxinadu
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Posted : Oct 13, 2011 01:43
some of it sounds a bit too shuffeled like there are too many drums/loops going on and they mess with each other? really nice psychedelic ideas otherwise.
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Posted : Oct 13, 2011 17:52
+1 cool ideas.. also you should chek the 2.40 ish part like said before.. just before that arp starts.. it dont sound proper to me.. bass flow is very nice.. this is triangle bass no?
end part reverb sounds are really kool!
re-arrange what you thought was real
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Posted : Oct 15, 2011 02:54
thanka, me work
Art Of Existence
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Posted : Oct 16, 2011 04:52
Unique and very dark and psychic track! I kinda like it! Very twisted! Not my style at all but i see what your getting at! Interesting all the way! GJ!
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