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New psy tune - "Barinlock"

motorik
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Posted : May 21, 2004 11:11
A long promo of a track i Just finished "Brainlock".
Reveiews of any kind (spond,structure, ETC) are Highly aprecciated.
http://motorik.dyndns.org/songs/motorik-brainlock(demo).mp3


Thanx in advance.

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Motorik
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kontrance


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Posted : May 21, 2004 19:28
nice
but little slow.. create tracks more fast
***you need to add more sound***
kabelll
Bazzara


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Posted : May 22, 2004 00:33
yo motorik, nice work over here,
not realy my style but keep it up ..
kontrance


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Posted : May 22, 2004 02:00
you are need to bring demo track no full...
motorik
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Posted : May 22, 2004 11:34
@Das fung ...RESPECT...
Very wise tips i will see how can i use them.
Thnx my friend

Kontrance thanx man i appreciate the time you took for listening....
As for the speed this is the speed i like i don't think it should be faster ,anything faster just ruin my style.
When the track is faster, many times it can ruin the groove that can't be felt because of it's speed ...i'm trying to something on the border of psy-progressive and so is the speed for atmosphere

BTW this is a long Demo (maybe a bit too long) but it's not full track,there are 2 or more mins for this track.
Some people over here send demo of 30 second... in 30 second you can maybe check the sound but nothing more....no progress trough time no ambience of track no different drumming.
So i post a longer one so people can really review.
Once again thanx kontrance.

@Bazzara ...thanx for listening even though
it's not your cup of tea...glad you liked it anyway.


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Motorik
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Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
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Posted : May 23, 2004 11:38
ok...
as far as sound GREAT JOB MATE i like how the kick and the bass sit together.
the samples and breaks are very intersting though i think u should use the sample "brainlock" LESS!!
the weird thing for me in this track is that it has many breaks like fullon but the sounds and atmosphere of the track is a diff' one...i would make it more repetetive and grinding...maybe use a 16 bars loop to create that feeling.
the last thing is the HH section....its boreing!!! threw out the whole track its the same beat with no development what so ever and i think that was the main reason for my feeling that the track is not powerfull enough and does not maintain its drive(thats the reason u felt u need all thoese breaks IMO)just add some small parts to the rythem section and your there.
any way to sum it up.....very good job i liked it very much and i really think that your work is professional...esp' when it comes to the sound and mix...GOOD ON YA...KEEP IT UP.
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Rishi
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Posted : May 23, 2004 13:10
I very much enjoyed it , also the tempo , Gooood sound and composition .... love ur breaks ... and only little thing is maybe a bit variation on the Hh            3 BooOoM ShanKaRA 3
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motorik
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Posted : May 23, 2004 14:22
@nomolos
Thanx for the compliments man ...great tips...i really forgot the HH somewhere in my diving into the tune... good one...already been changed.

Yes the breaks realy sound like full on though it's not full on tune ,i'm not gonna change this one but i'll try the 16 bars loops instead of 8 of 4 bars loop on my next tracks that should make it interesting without too breaks and too many changes.

Sound is good but I don't think the mix is as good as you think...still more work for this one ...mostly on leveling it....das fung will help me on that one!!!!

@rishi
Tan-x for your time and kind words...as i said i already changed the HH


Thanx all

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motorik
          "one good thing about music is when it hits you , you feel no pain" - Bob Marley
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