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New Psy Project from India Take a Hear
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divraj
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Posted : Aug 20, 2004 20:44
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strangefreakquency
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Posted : Aug 21, 2004 12:20
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supp mate
really really nice track u got hear man
nice bassline nice breaks
good sounds there
good drum rolls
and fuking awesome guitars
the vocals r nice 2
juss add a lil more sounds 2 the track and it will be perfect
good production also
great work mate
keep it up
peace
avi
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Rishi
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Posted : Aug 21, 2004 14:01
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Hi man 
In my opinion , u need some more red thread through the arrangment ....and in my opinion could be 3 different tracks
Its quite obvious u have some nice ideas ... but in my opinion u need to link these ideas better together, and maybe work on a bit more harmonious feeling ..( i dont know if its me , but the bass line and synths are playing false around 3 minuts .. ) i like ur break where u put in break beat and turn up the speed and break down in a hard beat ( with the guitar ) ..
but again .. some elements are standing out a bit to much .. the guitar is very loud , and the kick and bass line need a more steady volume also ..
But man . u have a lot of elements .-.. and if u try to seperate them u would have plenty material for tracks .. so keep it up ,.. and look forward hearing more
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divraj
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Posted : Aug 21, 2004 16:13
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thnx for the good feedback will work on the problems and soon put it up on soundclick i have also some other trcks in the making will put them up for review also thnx
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illusions
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Posted : Aug 22, 2004 13:42
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lots more indian psy coming out - excellent.
as other people have mentioned, your volume levels are off, and you definately need to work on your eq/mastering. try and get a more dynamic sound from your synths - keeps it from sounding like club trance.
btw - i think that delayed kick kills the groove on a dancefloor. dont overuse it
very nice breakdown/buildup towards the end of the track.
not my kinda music - but its definately got potential.
take it easy. boom! |
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shiv-e
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Posted : Aug 22, 2004 13:53
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ok i agree with rishi abt the 3 mins thing.. i noticed the problem too...
the guitars are super man... but ur sounds are at some points too loud for the bass ... u must work on your eq..
keep it up man..
u have great potential
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divraj
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Posted : Aug 24, 2004 09:21
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jihan plasma boy u see my trck now boom dj piv haha |
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divraj
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Posted : Aug 26, 2004 11:33
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uploaded a new version of the track plz take a hear |
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CLAW
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Posted : Aug 26, 2004 21:41
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I have to agree with the above posts... It seems that u know how to use your stuff, but as i was listening to your track, i was wondering why you have used sooo many ideas for 1 track...?? At some points your volumes are very loud, and correctly pointed out, do not over use the delay for the kicks so often...
Good try although I believe that if u split those ideas into 2 or maybe 3 tracks, you'll get some cool structures...
Try to make your tracks to be listen like a story, have a begining, the main body and the end... Try to connect those 3 parts and u got a complete track... Like i said, is like telling a story, the listener will be confused if u start telling him something and then continue with something else and then again something else... Focus on one "subject" and try to "match" your notes... there are for sure some off tone sounds...
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divraj
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Posted : Aug 27, 2004 05:26
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thnx for yr advice chp will try to split my ideas into diffrent trcks in the future |
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