New psy prog (whatever) piece. Photonation 135 bpm
Redshift
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 12:04:38
Comments and crits are welcomed, as usual...
Thanks
André
klippel
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 14:28
nice track, like the style. the kick drum is a bit dry and/or short for my taste. it does not melt with the baseline nicely.
overall the track could use some more sounds here and there and the arpeggio in the final part is also missing a bit energy or melodic finesse.
your synths sometime have quite some low freq content, the mix would benefit from more low shelving out or highpassing those leads. finalyy, even though i like slow tracks this one is just a tad too slow for my taste for what the music sounds like.
anyway, fun track, keep it coming http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 14:43
Hey Andre,
First, thank you for your comments on my track, I will take them into consideration.
About your track... I liked it,
I also think that there is room for improvement in some aspects,
Some advice :
1. Add leads - I think that the bass line gives the overall tone of the track and it is not enough, You should add a lead melody to add some more interest to the track.
2. Add some High Hat loops in the background to add more rhythm.
3. Add at least one break... By a break I mean a complete part without KICK at all.
Again thank you for your comments,
Hope my comments will help you too
Redshift
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 16:46
Thank you Klippel and Stonedolphin for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated, as always.
André
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 11:50
Agreeing about the lead and the break. Overall decent quality.
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supergroover
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 11:52
both repliers above are right.
What usually helps is to dance to your own tune. Pump up the volume and dance! Then you ll find out which parts are too long, too short, need spice or need breaks. Good luck!
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Redshift
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 13:24
Thanks for all the feedback guys, but, like a complete idiot, I managed to post a link to the wrong tune!!???
The link above is to a tune I made some months ago. The link below is to Photonation, my latest tune. If you could be bothered, please comment on this one as well...
