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New psy/prog/god only knows what... Enslavement 130 BPM
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Redshift
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 1, 2011 18:11:33
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 01:33
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Man! really god this one,listened to it 3 times, only to work on the mix more, the KickBass need more power, don't have a real advice on to make it happen but that's what i felt, other then that it's perfect  |
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 01:04
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the open hat seems a bit over-powering in relation to your other sounds.
i am listening on a laptop, so take it with a grain of salt, but often listening on shit-boxes gives an indication of things that are out of place.
to be honest the style doesn't do it for me as i find it very generic, but there are some nice grooves here. personally i would build a very diferent and crazy arrange with your parts, as they are all real nice, just the story is not convincing enough (to me at least).
The Way Back
https://faxinadu.bandcamp.com/album/the-way-back |
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Redshift
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 12:53
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@ Nomad Moon: Thanks a lot man! For your encouraging words 
@ Faxi Nadu: Thanks a million for making the effort to listen and comment. I think maybe the open hat is a bit high in the mix - will tame it just a little
Andre |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 14:03
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Hey Andre .. Big jump and improve (At the sound point) But still alot of work with arrange , And the harmony of tools (So i can understand faxi point about the way it sound/Heard by now , Yes .. sounds abit repeating and recycling themselfs so to some ppls can be sound 'UnRich' , When this is the truth , And/Or boring) - And sure andre here the place to show 'Whats realy going/Happen inside of you there ..' Your feeling .. Cant be (Hope not ..) Thats your feeling (There inside of you , When/Where you 'Hear' The final result (Of your work)/'What you want it to be' In your imagination .. There you are not "Hear" it with an 1-2 Mello's vst's right ? , Im sure that "There .." You can "Hear" it with some more .. (You better be .. hehehe ..) So bring it be same here/(To here ..) Let us hear it too on real ..
You must do somthing with your hh and percussions by runing them with an different order here and there , Its can crazy , And also fill this 'Position' of the hh loops not enough , Not even to this kind of happy music like yours , They sound without any (Somthing) effect special on , Just runing and runing to nowhere , Just like that .. So find some more hh's (With an different sound and color and add them in and your track will 'Start' get somthing that he can 'Hold on' - if you know what i mean) . BassKik combo imo can be nice but still alot of work have be done to being all be more 'Near' , 'Real' and 'Out' .. Your track need more 'Meat' ! , I can write you many ideas and options how doing that but i think will take me an page so better way try find more free information about here at 'The mother of the all baseline' May give you some more perspective .
Out of sound work and this i realy like your style and i dont agree here with Faxi at all (At the style issue .. Or may i dont hear much music , All can be ..) But i think andre you have an real cool style and you just have to learn more about 'Integration' (Of tools) inside your tunes/Storys , Theres somthing (Side) in your music who sound 'Picnical' (Mean - Eazy to eat ..) You just have bring much more mayonnaise into your sandwich .
All the best ..
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Redshift
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 19:06
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On 2011-10-02 14:03, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
Hey Andre .. Big jump and improve (At the sound point) But still alot of work with arrange , And the harmony of tools (So i can understand faxi point about the way it sound/Heard by now , Yes .. sounds abit repeating and recycling themselfs so to some ppls can be sound 'UnRich' , When this is the truth , And/Or boring) - And sure andre here the place to show 'Whats realy going/Happen inside of you there ..' Your feeling .. Cant be (Hope not ..) Thats your feeling (There inside of you , When/Where you 'Hear' The final result (Of your work)/'What you want it to be' In your imagination .. There you are not "Hear" it with an 1-2 Mello's vst's right ? , Im sure that "There .." You can "Hear" it with some more .. (You better be .. hehehe ..) So bring it be same here/(To here ..) Let us hear it too on real ..
You must do somthing with your hh and percussions by runing them with an different order here and there , Its can crazy , And also fill this 'Position' of the hh loops not enough , Not even to this kind of happy music like yours , They sound without any (Somthing) effect special on , Just runing and runing to nowhere , Just like that .. So find some more hh's (With an different sound and color and add them in and your track will 'Start' get somthing that he can 'Hold on' - if you know what i mean) . BassKik combo imo can be nice but still alot of work have be done to being all be more 'Near' , 'Real' and 'Out' .. Your track need more 'Meat' ! , I can write you many ideas and options how doing that but i think will take me an page so better way try find more free information about here at 'The mother of the all baseline' May give you some more perspective .
Out of sound work and this i realy like your style and i dont agree here with Faxi at all (At the style issue .. Or may i dont hear much music , All can be ..) But i think andre you have an real cool style and you just have to learn more about 'Integration' (Of tools) inside your tunes/Storys , Theres somthing (Side) in your music who sound 'Picnical' (Mean - Eazy to eat ..) You just have bring much more mayonnaise into your sandwich .
All the best ..
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Hey Cardinals Cartel,
Thank you very much for listening to my track and your good advice and comments. Its appreciated more than you can can imagine!!
Cheers
Andre
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 20:32
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On 2011-10-02 14:03, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
you just have to learn more about 'Integration' (Of tools) inside your tunes/Storys , Theres somthing (Side) in your music who sound 'Picnical' (Mean - Eazy to eat ..) You just have bring much more mayonnaise into your sandwich .
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yah agreed, very nice way to put it
The Way Back
https://faxinadu.bandcamp.com/album/the-way-back |
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Redshift
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 21:44
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Yeah and mayo is really fattening too
I have tamed the open hi hat a bit. Sounds better already. Thanks guys.
Andre |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 18:31
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Redshift
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 22:32
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Thanks Fat Data. Thats the hardest thing for me. Getting a powerful kick/bass right... |
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Redshift
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 22:33
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Thanks Fat Data. Thats the hardest thing for me. Getting a powerful kick/bass right... |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 23:01
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