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Posted : Jan 6, 2014 20:43:11
Hi psytravellers,
I leave here my new tune for suggestions & shares.
good vibes
CarlitoLove
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Jan 7, 2014 02:15
spacy intro.. i like the pace of the trak.. makes for a lot of space between sounds.. but flow wise u need to work more.. cause after break at 3.00 it feels a lot like a new track starting.. the whip kinda sound is used too much imo.. melodies are good but they are way in the back.. which can be good.. but here it would cool if u bring em a tiny bit in front.. 5.22 is nice.. cool groovy goa vibe.. also i think u use too much of the same sounds.. i dont knw maybe a taste thingy but i like evolving progressive sounds... u got the grrove man.. work a bit more on synthesis, leads,, and u should be good.. keep at it yo.. cheers..
P.S now that someone commented on ur sound, go and find the first post with 0 comments and show some love... peace out..
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CarlitoLove
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Posted : Jan 7, 2014 05:34
Thx jeeboomba for your reply. I can't understand what you mean with your P.S.!!
With "flow wise" do you mean somethign like evolution? I imagine you refer to the entrance of 146bpm until the small break. I agree with you. In anycase I'm ok if at minute 3:00 it seems is starting a new track. There's also tonal change. Only second part is made thinking in dj mixing.
I'll keep in mind about the space position of leads during the final mix.
It's wonderful you feel some goa vibes, was my intention and it means I got it.
Maybe you are right when you say I must evolve sounds as whip. I get used and your clean hear can help me a lot.
I appreciate so much your suggestions.
booom
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Posted : Jan 7, 2014 14:12
cheers man.. all i can say is keep working.. cause for me, stoned off my face jam sessions are the best teachers ;].. by my p.s i meant to ask you to share some comments on other works here on the workshop.. so many posts with no replies .. wud be nice to see homies sharing words... peace
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Posted : Jan 7, 2014 14:42
I liked the intro and how it started... slowgoing psychedelic stuff started to remind of good old sizilian sizzle stick for example or pelinpala had some as well. Started to have a smile on my face...
To be honest i was expecting this slow groove to go all the way to end, which means this change around 3min didnt fit in my opinion and it feels totally different track with different feeling and atmosphere. I'd say that you could easily make two different style tracks from this changes
The first half have all good elements for total psychedelic track with these samples in it, but somehow same samples used in the other half lost the same feeling. This second half in my mind reminded more Suomisound with its elements and it was waiting for the climax that didn't sadly come :/
Overall: Good sounds, Good groove but not so nice construction on the track. Work on the flow and if its needed to make tempo changes on the track it really need to work perfectly to sound good.
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Posted : Jan 7, 2014 18:00
Thanks Frosty Fennic for your suggestions.
Indeed I think I must work on the flow making evolution on psy sounds you speak about. In the first part are perfect! In the second they don't work as before.
Also I must work on tempo changing and especially in the entrance of the second part.
I dont' think it's a problem if they seems two different tracks. It could be. And also I wanted the transition to second part sounds like melodic trance.
Also I wasn't searching a climax as suomisound, I was looking for more old school goa gated melodies as jeebomba commented.
