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New Progressive Trance track - a deeper blue - 133 bpm

Codex Astartes
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Posted : Jun 3, 2013 18:27:10
Hello everyone,

here is my brand new track, called "a deeper blue", in a progressive style.

https://soundcloud.com/zensunni23/a-deeper-blue-1

Feel free to give your opinion!

Thanks a lot!

Codex

W.A.D

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Posted : Jun 4, 2013 15:16
hey Codex Astartes

i think its a nice track, but for me it bored me a little bit in time. maybe add some others synth and layer your melody.
and maybe you have to put up the clap and hihats a little bit. i think they are too quite.
the bass sounds nice, like the key changes, but it doesn't sound so clear for me. but maybe its because of my headphones.

good work. keep it up
Codex Astartes
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Posted : Jun 4, 2013 18:36
Thanks you for you opinion! It is important!
I still have to work on this track!
I will probably layer the final melody with a lower LFO synth, gonna check it this evening!
Notice that the soundcloud link has updated, and the track has still changed!

https://soundcloud.com/zensunni23/a-deeper-blue-2

Thx again!


          http://www.myspace.com/roboterkommtzumir
http://soundcloud.com/adeptus-mechanicus-23
http://www.facebook.com/pages/A-Robot-Comes-to-Her/116733615069961
klippel
Stereofeld

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Posted : Jun 4, 2013 19:13
cool track, nice melos and flow.. good mood.

i would lower the subs of the bassline as it is very prominent as is. the percussion is very static and also not loud enough to get the right drive to the track. and i am missing a overall storyline a bit.

already definitely has potential but needs some tuning to get it really running in my eyes

keep grooving!           http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
Numenor
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posted : Jun 4, 2013 19:32
i like it bro, rhythm is good fills are good, the space is ok and deep, work more on the arrangement
Codex Astartes
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Jun 6, 2013 19:42
Thanks you all for your replies and advices!

I keep working on this track, and i will post a new version soon!           http://www.myspace.com/roboterkommtzumir
http://soundcloud.com/adeptus-mechanicus-23
http://www.facebook.com/pages/A-Robot-Comes-to-Her/116733615069961
Codex Astartes
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  52
Posted : Jun 8, 2013 19:11
Here's the brand new version of the track, probably in its definitive one:

https://soundcloud.com/zensunni23/a-deeper-blue-3

Cheers!           http://www.myspace.com/roboterkommtzumir
http://soundcloud.com/adeptus-mechanicus-23
http://www.facebook.com/pages/A-Robot-Comes-to-Her/116733615069961
Codex Astartes
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics :  27
Posts :  52
Posted : Jun 13, 2013 18:25
Latest version:
https://soundcloud.com/zensunni23/a-deeper-blue-3

Thx!           http://www.myspace.com/roboterkommtzumir
http://soundcloud.com/adeptus-mechanicus-23
http://www.facebook.com/pages/A-Robot-Comes-to-Her/116733615069961
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