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New Progressive Track - Need Finishing Advice/Tips
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Soundmagus
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Posted : Sep 25, 2004 11:27
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Hello all
first track i have put up here so be gentle 
this track done with Cubase using many vstis. Would some feedback from you guys as i respect u guys a lot, one of the only paces on the net where people really seem to know there shit. so any feedback would be much appreciated. the track is called "the maker" thanks
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Soundmagus
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Posted : Oct 1, 2004 12:12
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COme ON!!!! somebody listen to it, rofl :P |
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The Green Channel
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Posted : Oct 1, 2004 12:41
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It sounds quite nice the ending is afwul though. Try to work on that maybe, adding a "cleaner" melody for instance.
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alfalfa
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Posted : Oct 1, 2004 20:05
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like it, dont like the meldoy that comes in at 3 mins - sounds a bit simple when it first comes in but gets better. i quite like the ending but it sounds a bit cluttered. also very short for a prog track. |
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psy Li Yun
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Posted : Oct 4, 2004 14:51
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Yeah its a good track...I like the pace of it...there's too much fats stuff about..its not easy making slower stuff...i havnt heard much prog stuff thats had that element of 'whats gonna happen?' quite intense..a few parts sound a tiny bit dated..as in it reminds me of some older trance but that snot neccerailly a bad thing...try and put as much of 'you' into your tracks as possible....otherwise all good...dont stop...if you have time have a listen to mine...psy Li Yun |
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Soundmagus
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Posted : Oct 6, 2004 14:34
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thanks guys, i appreciate the feedback, i will listen to urs psy.
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Ron Lyner
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Posted : Oct 10, 2004 01:19
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the first 3 minutes are great !!!
but the rest sounds like a whole other track with a very diffrent style, i dont like it..
replace the melodies with somthing else
and if you dont do it so please take their volume down, i cant hear the bass and its starting to sound more like full on with low bpm.
try and continue with the same style as the first 3 minutes.
good luck
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Djruth
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Posted : Oct 10, 2004 02:24
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I agree!
first 3 mins are killer...
the last part is more psy to me hehehe..
or like RON said.. sounds a bit like full on at lower bpm.
but all in all it´s still a very good production of good sound i think...
keep it up |
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Soundmagus
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Posted : Oct 14, 2004 21:25
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cheers guys, i think u are correct, 2 styles in 1 just dont work, but hey we got to experiment right, lol.
thanks for comments
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