hierophant3
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Posted : Jun 1, 2012 08:35:02
Watsup! ISRA,
Hope everyone's doing great. Here is a new progressive psy track i made recently; originally by a rockband, Killswitch Engage, this is not a remix per se, but sort of a progressive psy adaptation .....
Would love to hear you people's feedback on the concept of the track, the general mixdown of the track and the sounds used ofcourse....
Thanks a lot...
peace and love!!
Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 2, 2012 19:17
I am a little bit tired right now, so perhaps im not the best reviewer.
I think that the intro could have been a little bit shorter, or a bit more interesting.
The base translate to my monitors as a bit growly/muddy.
I would suggest that you progress the sounds further, keep evolving them. Because right now it becomes a bit monotone.
You have some nice atmo happening, but you could add more sounds, change it up abit and progress it a lot more to keep it more interessting.
hierophant3
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Posted : Jun 5, 2012 14:26
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On 2012-06-02 19:17, Grevinsky wrote:
I am a little bit tired right now, so perhaps im not the best reviewer.
I think that the intro could have been a little bit shorter, or a bit more interesting.
The base translate to my monitors as a bit growly/muddy.
I would suggest that you progress the sounds further, keep evolving them. Because right now it becomes a bit monotone.
You have some nice atmo happening, but you could add more sounds, change it up abit and progress it a lot more to keep it more interessting.
hey man, firstly thanks a ton for listening and the feedback...
the intro was supposed to be a bit long; that was the idea of the track; too bad, it doesn't sound interesting to your ears ..i guess i have a lot more to work on ....the same for the bass....thanks a lot for the feedback tho'
I'd love to hear out a few more responses regarding the track...especially regarding the problem with the bass.....
Icetoon
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Posted : Jun 5, 2012 16:06
I'm going to have to agree about the long intro. In my opinion, there's no real solid progression or development compensating for the long introduction to this track. Try introducing sounds and escalating them throughout the track instead of constantly repeating them. The percussion loops are also a bit monotonous; try spicing it up a bit.
About the bass : there is definitely some muddiness there but if that's the way you like your bass then it surely isn't a problem
..i guess i have a lot more to work on ....the same for the bass....thanks a lot for the feedback tho'
