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New Progressive Psy Trance track... (Full version)
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Pythagoraz
TimeDrained / Pythagoraz
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Posted : Mar 3, 2005 21:09
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Hello...
This is my first post here in the forum but Ive been around for a while.
I just finished a new track (The Inventer. It is my first real deep/Minimal trance track ever and I'm planning on sending it to labels but first I would like some peoples oppinion on it... -for instance, does it need more diversity?
http://www.pythagoraz.com/The%20Inventer.mp3
btw. Thanks for this great forum  |
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Pythagoraz
TimeDrained / Pythagoraz
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Posted : Mar 3, 2005 21:13
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Yes I know... My mastering sucks!  |
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Xamanist
Xamanist
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Posted : Mar 4, 2005 17:08
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hi man!
can't speak about the master, my speakers here at work aren't good
about the track: great groove and good sounds over it man, nice choices in there.. starts very well.. from 5:00 till the end i think it needs distinct sounds to make a diference from what's behind.. and some more evolution on the drum rythm, to give the track more energy IMO
overall it's a good progressive tune Danish-style
you are very good in this, for my portuguese ears only lacks a stronger end
best of luck! boom |
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Pythagoraz
TimeDrained / Pythagoraz
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Posted : Mar 5, 2005 01:12
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Thanks... more diversity in the second half of the track you say... well said..  I'll do something about it right away.
Take care |
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lucidpicnic
Lucid Picnic
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Posted : Mar 5, 2005 14:15
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i really enjoyed the track
no big problems with mastering imo
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F.R.E.A.K.
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Posted : Mar 5, 2005 16:55
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i'm downloading it
i'm curious about it... bom! |
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orange
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 14:11
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hhmm you could do better especialy in the low end departement not a bad bass and kick but a little to moody and dull but with a little mix and comp it will be very nice
it also needs a nice hook in the last 2 min like a synthlead or something
very very nice arragement it shows the road very clearly good keep it like this
the tracks is totaly my style
darky and proggy good job man keep it comming
orange
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 14:11
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hhmm you could do better especialy in the low end departement not a bad bass and kick but a little to moody and dull but with a little mix and comp it will be very nice
it also needs a nice hook in the last 2 min like a synthlead or something
very very nice arragement it shows the road very clearly good keep it like this
the tracks is totaly my style
darky and proggy good job man keep it comming
orange
http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic |
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orange
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 14:12
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hhmm you could do better especialy in the low end departement not a bad bass and kick but a little to moody and dull but with a little mix and comp it will be very nice
it also needs a nice hook in the last 2 min like a synthlead or something
very very nice arragement it shows the road very clearly good keep it like this
the tracks is totaly my style
darky and proggy good job man keep it comming
orange
http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 14:12
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hhmm you could do better especialy in the low end departement not a bad bass and kick but a little to moody and dull but with a little mix and comp it will be very nice
it also needs a nice hook in the last 2 min like a synthlead or something
very very nice arragement it shows the road very clearly good keep it like this
the tracks is totaly my style
darky and proggy good job man keep it comming
orange
http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 14:12
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hhmm you could do better especialy in the low end departement not a bad bass and kick but a little to moody and dull but with a little mix and comp it will be very nice
it also needs a nice hook in the last 2 min like a synthlead or something
very very nice arragement it shows the road very clearly good keep it like this
the tracks is totaly my style
darky and proggy good job man keep it comming
orange
http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic |
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Pythagoraz
TimeDrained / Pythagoraz
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 14:54
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ok ok I get it... lol
thanks for the feedback |
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lucidpicnic
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Posted : Mar 6, 2005 23:04
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hehehe
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