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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Feb 14, 2011 19:17:03
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wizanda
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 14, 2011 20:24
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Feb 15, 2011 15:15
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All this mello pads that repeating again and again and again .. And again .. Make all track be sound very boring . Better mix - Mello in the backrounds (Not in the front) , Bass kik is lead . More vol to hh loops . Bring more sounds , Harmony and living in .
Keep it up ..
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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Feb 17, 2011 04:10
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Thanks a lot for your listens and feedback.
I think the bass sounds distorted because I added a bit of distortion to it to cut through when all the layers are going.
Yeah, I know the mellow pads and repetition,
I put a lot of work into trying to make it not be repetitive but I guess I'm going to try another approach, not use the same patches in different sections of the song and use more cutting lead sounds, and as little repetition as I can possibly manage. Also yes the kick can always come out more. |
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Oni Katsu
Li/fe
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Posted : Feb 17, 2011 16:31
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THIS IS SOOOOO CUTE HAhahahhahaha
writing while listening
Bass is mighty
But it sounds like it has a chorus attatched to it, that usually wont sound too cool on big speakers as far as i have heard, but its quite original and i like it
I like the way ur sounds are communicating with eachother
the leads are very psychedelic and "pretty" i love them
i also like the way u use the same lead a lot but still add some changes to it and still make it quite interesting.
 http://soundcloud.com/li-fe
I said I like it dirty, not muddy. |
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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Feb 18, 2011 20:19
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thanks for the advice on the bass and the listens, I like your tracks too ! |
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b0Lt
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Posted : Feb 20, 2011 04:10
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oh wow, and i tought maybe some quality here.. sry again, but the quality just kills it! some interesting sweeps/fx going on, arrangement seems also quite nice.. but the boom is lacking, and care about quality.. |
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Oni Katsu
Li/fe
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Posted : Feb 20, 2011 04:41
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It needs extreme buildups, powerful kickrolls and lout noise sweeps, crashes and louder percussion, adding a lowpitched reversed kick in every break before the bassline kicks in and add crash right to it
that would x10 the energy.
And its great that you like my music!
it's flattering ^^
Edit: And kick needs KICKKK http://soundcloud.com/li-fe
I said I like it dirty, not muddy. |
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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Feb 21, 2011 20:54
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Thanks for your listens and advice Oni and bOLt
I agree with both of you, bigger kick and kickrolls, more intense build ups and more intense percussion would make it much better.
I don't know why but sometimes I make tracks and lose sight of the basics when focusing on one aspect too much. Also, I know my mastering process sucks too, which kind of squashes the sound, anyway, it's always to use advice and put into next track, so thanxx  |
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Psykeltur
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Posted : Feb 22, 2011 07:12
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I love the bassline but I'm no expert on how it may or may not sound on a big system! But otherwise I agree with the rest that it need better mixing, percussion sound very low?
Also the way you sounds play with each other, very nice!
Good work, keep them coming! <3 |
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