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New one, a bit harder =) Enjoy and comment!!
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 26, 2010 01:34:25
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Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Jan 26, 2010 02:30
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This has a cooooooool grooooooooove, and some nice percussion. Is there some swing on the kick, bass, and percs?
And the open hihat filter/pan threw me off haha.
That break at 6:07 - 6:39 is a little long for me, and i feel like you could use some really cool quote lines in that space from 6:40 - 7:08.
At 8:23, that crash sounds like the attack of it got too cut off.
When everything comes back together at 9:22, I want more sound. I don't know if it's the high c note that keeps being repeated, or if there's too much reverb. It's up to you, but you might want to try reverting back to the key of g right there instead of to c, or changing the lead lines up a little bit to make the g notes hit on some of the main beats - the 1st and 3rd of some of the measures.
Also, what kind of reverb you using on those long reverse crashes?
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 26, 2010 05:50
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First of all thank you very much for listening, I do really apreciate your critic and helped me to start improving my mistakes  And here the answers: 
There is no swing on kick,bass & percs, they have automations. The first break yes its maybe long but cool for me , about the quote lines at 6:40 I think youre right, I should and will add some sample there =). Ill fix that crash thing aswell.
At 9:22 youre right again, it is that I dont seem to find the right lead but Ill continue working on it, actually I will replatce everything from 9:22 to 10:48 maybe using a G minor chord.. any ideas there? And finally Im using Fruity reeverb 2 for crash & snares, just taking out hi cut and adding some low cut.
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Obelizk
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Posted : Jan 27, 2010 05:39
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 27, 2010 10:19
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Obelizk
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Posted : Jan 28, 2010 00:48
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 29, 2010 07:08
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