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New nightpsy track (149 bpm)
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Ascension
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Posted : Apr 26, 2012 05:51:05
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Equilizyme
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Posted : Apr 27, 2012 00:59
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This is pretty neat man! I think I might work on that snare a bit, sounds a bit raw compared to the rest of the track.
4.20 (lol) has a really cool vibe to it, the atmosphere really gets going! That drone really contributes to that, maybe keep that drone more prominent through the 4:50 - 5:40 section to maintain the atmosphere you have at 4.20. Very nice resolution to the low C at 7:20, my ear was really waiting for it, glad you delivered 
awesome track man !
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Ascension
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Posted : Apr 27, 2012 21:57
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makus
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Posted : Apr 28, 2012 02:09
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in my humble opinion, in such music raw perc suck. i like when it is crystally clear as a fucking morning dew.
dont like the kick too. it is thin and too sharp to my ear. i just want it bigger. maybe just put a liitle bit of r-bass around 60 hz on the kick.
@ 4.06 there is this twisted lead, which is amazing, but then it dissapears and nothing comes after it. just random noise. for too long. there should be another pretty powerful lead, like the one that returns at around 5:05.
7:19 - end has nothing to do with the story of the track. to my ear it sounds random again, though the bass change is nice.
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Ascension
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Posted : Apr 28, 2012 03:44
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Flow2013
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Posted : May 5, 2012 22:02
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I like the raw percussions 
Sounds nice to me
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : May 5, 2012 22:46
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Hey Ascension ..
Imo first time hearing your tunes (When this is great cause i always like listen to new waves/Styles/direction's) .
About the track :
Intro is realy cool , Imo you can add some few more sounds in . Was realy surprise/Disappointed when kik came in (Its start grand Then become little - When all fall down) . Also your bass down there .. This is not a real bass m8 .. And im sorry for my straightly (But this is me) And all what i hear in here is one big/Long wuuuu who runing all over with some note changes (When some time the change's of the note just make it in some place's worse) .
Work on your hh loops , Bring them some life They sound far away when they should drive the track .
My advice First mix your track so we can hear what happen/Going on in .
All the best !
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Ascension
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Posted : May 6, 2012 04:35
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^Thanks for listening and the comments. I don't understand your comment about the bass though, care to explain? Do you want to hear each triplet more? The way the bass sounds is completely intentional as it hits the same time as the kick. It sounded pretty good on a turbosound rig when I played it last
Hats/perc are definitely something I always feel I need to work on . http://soundcloud.com/ascensionsound
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