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Posted : Nov 1, 2012 23:24:16
Hello Isratrancers:) I have been writing music for awhile but am just now getting around to releasing my tracks. This is mainly because I wanted to keep them a surprise to listeners when I play live, but I would now like to spread my work around so I have a chance to play outside of the United States, and find a record label home:)
Have a listen and tell me what you enjoy about this track or what you would change! many thanks, BaBaR
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 00:06
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 00:20
Thank you Smoker:)
Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 03:03
I like the intro sample very much, the track seems tight and has a nice volume, though a bit to fast for my personal taste atm.
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 03:31
Thank you Galaxy:) I completely understand what you mean with speed. I like my trance intense, but not too fast. To explain, remember when neuro trance started to take a turn for the worse a few years back? people were writing 200bpm dark psy tracks etc, when the genre started out at around 160-ish...I wanted a more full-on sound, with the same kind of intensity, so I opted for 157bpm on this track, making it somewhere in between, keeping the tonal bassline of full on instead of the drolling mono bass of neuro. However, in the end it is a matter of taste, I personally do not dig on prog, but I do like uplifting downtempo..weird eh?
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 06:57
Cool man nice work
I think some of high-mids/highs are a bit peaky though
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 11:00
nice ideas dood.. i like your hat and perc work.. sounding good kripsy and cleary..
i like the trak very much at 4.20 when that panning padish melo sound invoke so much dark energy very intense.. i would at this point maybe add another layer of wierdo lead to pull the chariot..
you have nice control on the fx you use.. good job
def chking more.. over and out
re-arrange what you thought was real
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Posted : Nov 2, 2012 17:51
Yes Reality Pixie I agree with the high mids and highs, thats my fault as I do not have a desirable acoustic environment. I like dynamic percussion, but I tend to mix it down a bit loud, and then try to adjust, and in a master, if there is any further eq'ing, as there was here and in my other tracks, they can be noticeably peaky, but ive played this one out live and it seemed fine over the high-def system we were playing on.
Thank you for the feedback Jeeboomba, im glad you liked the track, yea, more work is going into a revised version of this track because I was very happy with the way this version turned out, I wanted even more complexity, but was on a schedule for a live show, so I made up for it with Ableton mangles:) the future version will be even more twisted! and as far as the fx, thank you, that's where the real magic is for this style I think!
