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HaydenLM1
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Posted : Jun 30, 2010 21:19:22
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 04:06
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i heard i'm the pirate. i think you have a lot of potential. the track is good but you missed the opportunity to make it excellent.
1. the fisrt melody that comes in at 1:45. i'm sure i heard it somewhere before...
2. your mix is clean but it lacks low frquencies. i don't fill enough power comes from the lows.
3. you need for this style to make more uplifts. when you have a break don't just throw the groove in abruptly. make an uplift. the crowd love it and this what everybody do at this style of fullon.
4. at 3:00 you have very long break and after about a minute you have another big break. i think it's too much breaks and you little bit losing it.
5. still it's good track i just think it can be even better. you have here great melodies and sounds. |
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HaydenLM1
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 06:18
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Thank you for your comment úåãä çç
im only into trance for about 6 months.. i have alot to learn!
and i know i need more low freq's i might add later on 
but dont know where u have heard the melody from ..
Thanks again for the comment ! |
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 13:17
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On 2010-07-01 06:18, HaydenLM1 wrote:
Thank you for your comment úåãä çç
im only into trance for about 6 months.. i have alot to learn!
and i know i need more low freq's i might add later on
but dont know where u have heard the melody from ..
Thanks again for the comment !
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if you just 6 months into tracne this realy amazing. it sounds to me almost pro. |
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exkor
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 23:42
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brother chichke is right man
you need more fucking BASS!!
put an EQ on your bass OR the master bus and bump the lows up (see which option works better, sometimes EQ on master is too much) around 100-200Hz.
Also towards the end your bass is eaten up by your leads (like around 5:00). Do you filter all tracks except kick and bass at 100-150Hz? if you don't you should! Trance framework puts the kick and bass as holy untouchable and the rest is second best so keep it in mind...
I also agree that for 6 months this sounds too good. You probably have some previous experience with some other styles I assume, no?
good luck bro
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Scenix
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 15:48
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HaydenLM1
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Posted : Jul 6, 2010 10:39
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On 2010-07-01 23:42, exkor wrote:
brother chichke is right man
you need more fucking BASS!!
put an EQ on your bass OR the master bus and bump the lows up (see which option works better, sometimes EQ on master is too much) around 100-200Hz.
Also towards the end your bass is eaten up by your leads (like around 5:00). Do you filter all tracks except kick and bass at 100-150Hz? if you don't you should! Trance framework puts the kick and bass as holy untouchable and the rest is second best so keep it in mind...
I also agree that for 6 months this sounds too good. You probably have some previous experience with some other styles I assume, no?
good luck bro
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Thank you!
and yes i am also a guitar player:)
im playing guitar for about 3 years now . |
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