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New morning track, 145bpm
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segment 7
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Posted : Feb 17, 2009 13:06:10
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Not really sure what to make of this one, think i've listened to it a few too many times. It's a bit boring, could do with adding some progressions in it but i can't really stand to listen to it anymore.
Basically though i've been working on my kick/bass/hi hats alot and am wondering how they're sounding, i think they're getting better.
Might be a bit on the fullon side, although i tried to stay away from it. No worries though, the track in the pipeline is muchhhh more twisted 
Please have a listen and let me know what you think though....
http://files.filefront.com/13307398
Thankyou very much,
Ben
  Projection makes perception. The world is what you gave it, nothing more than that. It is a witness to your state of mind, the outside picture of an inward condition. As a man thinketh, so does he perceive- Anonymous
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Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 19, 2009 01:24
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hi there!
i dont think its much wrong with the kick and bass combo and other percussion...
but the balance between the groove section versus the melody is very bad mixed, and you have not put enough effort in melody and arrangement, it sounds a little childish to me. i didnt like it..
but like i said good work on the bass and kick and other percussion... looking forward to something more twisted and more well arranged piece 
cheers
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segment 7
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Posted : Feb 19, 2009 02:16
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cheers for the reply freeflow, i agree with you, i like the kick/bass/perc but arnt really a fan of the rest. i've just listened to it a few too many times to do any more work on it, just wanted to get it finished really. may go back to it at a later date.
and don't you worry, i've very nearly finished an insanely twisted one, been messing around alot
ben
Projection makes perception. The world is what you gave it, nothing more than that. It is a witness to your state of mind, the outside picture of an inward condition. As a man thinketh, so does he perceive- Anonymous
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