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IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 15, 2007 16:01
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Hi evrybody
this week i made a small song which i think its good for me.
what should i work on it? the drums? pls listen to the song and say me whats not ok..
i'm not very long into producing but the longer time i produce the better it comes XD
omg i forgot the download link XD:
http://uploaded.to/?id=q669zd
have a nice day^^
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Posted : Dec 16, 2007 03:45
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Ok .. I go with you ..
Realy dont sure what it is . Dont think i ever heard any kind of this type of music in the psy scene . Trance is not . (Maybe minimal of somthing) .
First of all you need to fill it with an many more element in , Leads , Interesting loops work , Bass abit cheesey for my taste and sure for the psychadelic tracks , Heard some games with but this is not enough imo , More hh work + Eq , Couldt hear prec's around , Any special dizzying synths , Realy dont know what you tryd produce . The kik is weak and hollow and need an work , Also all track need abit more setting and arrangement in . And after all - Mix .
I think that the most important thing is that you must think with youeself to where you take it and to where it go , Take the time and work hard , Find it an frame for (Of an style that you want to see it in , Or just follow your heart your feeling and your thoughts) .
Hope i help , Good luck ! .
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IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 16, 2007 19:47
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ok, i think i saw the problem..
i want to do some melodic psytrance but i said im not very long into producing.. everyday i get better
its a really raw version, only 2 or 3 hours of editing.. now i have a longer (4:50) version wich is about 5h edited..
http://uploaded.to/?id=j4d1yv
thanks for the feedback, i will start a new project with more work on the EQ's and so..
how do you arrange a song? first put all the patterns down and then do the automation, or do it both at the same time?
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