New GOA track in progress... need some help plz :)
JudaiKa
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 10:36:45
hey all so i started a track 2 days a go on my macbook
which i never do but my pc crashed, and everything went pretti smooth so far but i think i have an issue with the Arrangment
so if someone got some idea that would be nice.
thx all
llama.exodus
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 14:36
Melodies are trippy as hell I like the modulations and those little sound synth sounds, good job man =)
Your track could surely use more percussion in my opinion, needs to be more dynamic in that sense. A little bass variation could do some good i think.
JudaiKa
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 17:43
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On 2012-04-12 14:36, llama.exodus wrote:
Melodies are trippy as hell I like the modulations and those little sound synth sounds, good job man =)
Your track could surely use more percussion in my opinion, needs to be more dynamic in that sense. A little bass variation could do some good i think.
thx. youre correct! i need to make percs. my laptop has no samples on it its suppose to be for djing but my pc fried so.... hh
ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 21:20
Great track! My only issue with it would be hat there are too many transitions, they seem sort of random. Try building the tracks more as a whole to each transition, the ones at about 3 minute and 5 minutes are great but all the other little ones that just return to a similar melody make the bigger transitions seem anti-climactic.
Maybe pull most of the notes from the melody to have a more minimal version to use at the start, and bring in a new layer and/or more notes into the melody after each small transition, and save the full melody for after the more significant break in the middle.
I suppose I am just saying that after each transition there should be something new, even if it is just an added layer.
Love the sound though, very trippy melodies indeed, nice oldschool goa sound!
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 21:27
hey. yeah i think you need to give your bass more presence. Turn that thing up and give it some bass! your melodies are great but i agree they need mroe variation. and more percs you can synthesize perc no trouble if you dont have samples. search google for some tuts. good luck! ::)
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JudaiKa
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 23:40
thx guys gr8 comments,
JudaiKa
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 23:41
new version a little fix
Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 13, 2012 12:41
Nice intro. Nice old school goa touch on the melody.
I would work abit with the kick and base, especially the kick, (perhaps thats a matter of taste tho).
You really succeed of making a goa vibe over the whole track, normally im not so much for goa but this sounds real good .
at 4.25 i would work a little bit more on the buildup, maybe adding a rise of some kind, kick rolls are not that exciting.
A few less of these small breaks wouldent hurt, instead you could do one or two bigger buildups. You kill the energy and the progression abit when you cut it that often, especially in the end part.
JudaiKa
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Posted : Apr 13, 2012 14:59
im constantly working on editing the arrangment havent got the one yet but i finally got some samples on my laptop so this should give life to the track and replace the kickrolls markers Appriciate the comment.
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Posted : Apr 13, 2012 23:53
The upper limit of main lead is kinda low,it lacks the upper freqs to sound acidy.Nothing really screams here (not enough resonance) which sometimes make the best parts of the track.
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Posted : Apr 14, 2012 00:52
The overal feeling around is cool - For goa style (Im not form those who into talking pads) , There mix work to do in .
Tell me .. How can you hear this kik .. Dont make you a headache ? , Its true 20 years ago artists use to use this kind of kik's but you know ..
Times haz change And goa artists today make all be sound much more sharper 1 - Beacuse its bother the listeners ears 2 - Sound realy bad at
the turbo's . Also bass need work .
Listen .. This is sound 100% pure goa of the old good day's (There on the beach ..) , If you can bring it be 2012 will be lovely
By now (At the sound point) Thats realy hard for me to listen .
Keep being creative , Keep improve your sound .. Cheers !
you can synthesize perc no trouble if you dont have samples. search google for some tuts. good luck! ::)
