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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Nov 25, 2005 23:24
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ritual_om
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 26, 2005 05:20
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hey!nice track.clear production and nice processing.
more melodic elements would be a nice addition but that's just me.the percussion should be more complex.all in all nice tune.
listen to my track if you want to.
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Nathan
IsraTrance Senior Member
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Posted : Nov 26, 2005 14:02
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As I said before: You have a talent. This is interesting more than some tacks by well based artists in the scene. It's good!  but what u need now is a constrictive criticism. So here it is: this track sound like 2 tracks and not one. The change of the bassline is good but the problem is with the melody as I said it sound like mixing with another track.
Overall good work. Something that is not far from Xerox & illumination.
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Nov 26, 2005 15:27
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On 2005-11-26 14:02, Nathan wrote:
As I said before: You have a talent. This is interesting more than some tacks by well based artists in the scene. It's good! but what u need now is a constrictive criticism. So here it is: this track sound like 2 tracks and not one. The change of the bassline is good but the problem is with the melody as I said it sound like mixing with another track.
Overall good work. Something that is not far from Xerox & illumination.
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i appreciate this very much. critisism is what i need. thanks for the good words, the critisism is good. hope to write better stuff in the future. the rust was removed a bit with this track 
percussion is something i work on...more practice is needed. melodies, that is only imagination and i hope to be better in the future
thanks ritual_om and Nathan!
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Dec 1, 2005 21:09
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me asks for more ctisism!!!
please
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psy Li Yun
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 1, 2005 22:00
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nice track mate! nice and quirky and really tight noises....what are ya using? |
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Dec 2, 2005 08:20
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unfortunatly its only my shitty pc and fruity loops 
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Dec 4, 2005 07:40
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last calling for reviews
anybody else?
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