Oni Katsu
Li/fe
Started Topics :
101
Posts :
704
Posted : Dec 26, 2011 01:38:52
Hey Isra! Since you guys are my favorite artists of all, and i always get something great from asking for feedback here!
I'd like you to take a listen to my track for now?
I'm sure you'll somehow like it? (:
You may choose the genre of this, House influenced Fullon
Or Fullon influenced house, i'm not sure what this is, but i know it sounds, at LEAST decent
Everything that bothers you about this, give feedback?
Maybe i could redo my sidechaining? What's your way if sidechaining in logic?
Arrangement? What do i need to do better?
Any glitching plugins you like? then i could make my lead melodies more powerful at the breaks i have...
Maybe there is something wrong with my flow?
i hope you enjoy this track, and i hope i won't have to bump here several times before i can get some sort of reply from you guys!
COMET SHELL
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
50
Posts :
577
Posted : Dec 27, 2011 21:29
hi, its not what i would normaly listen too, but it has got some great parts in the track and i think you have your own style going there dude, some of the synth sounds are not to my taste, but they dont sound wrong or anything, thats just my taste so it dosnt really matter.
its deffinately an interesting track and has some cool stuff going on. nice one.
p.s i love that little glitchy bit at 2.10
Chemistry
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
18
Posts :
242
Posted : Dec 27, 2011 23:22
clean track
a lot of people like this sound if you care. not maybe here (well those that type) but it's a clean and fun track. I would however say starting after 2:25 put stop/slap (right now you have dips) in the track to emphasize on the energy/transition points if that makes sense. also the part from 2:39 to 3:05 cut/stop/studder and slap that section as a whole to build up to your glitch thing.
I know you weren't speaking of me in your post and maybe you want to hear from "certain" people idk this is just what I hear and think
what DAW for this song?
McMungbean
Started Topics :
1
Posts :
2
Posted : Dec 28, 2011 01:26
Quote:
On 2011-12-27 21:29, glitchin wrote:
i think you have your own style going there dude,
^^ definitely got ur own style going there be a good way to introduce newcomers to the darkside lol great energy throughout the track if i had to pick on anything it would proble be the snare dont know if it too loud or not maybe to much dec or rel just my thoughts great track otherwise
Oni Katsu
Li/fe
Started Topics :
101
Posts :
704
Posted : Dec 28, 2011 16:01
@Chemistry: Thanks for a great feedback comment man, This topic is for everyone to comment. Every listener knows what THEY would like to hear in a track.
Every comment is equally important
And i'll make a proper buildup from where you told me to, i was thinking tonight that i wanted to stop the effects there and just keep the flat-jumping bass without changing any notes to make it sound like it's building ... THAT way, but i could also glitch on as you say!
http://soundcloud.com/li-fe
I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
Oni Katsu
Li/fe
Started Topics :
101
Posts :
704
Posted : Dec 28, 2011 17:39
Started Topics :
6
Posts :
253
Posted : Dec 28, 2011 21:52
You have very good ideas for melodies, mate.
Surely, it isn't my cup of tea. But you are very creative, and despite not liking this genre, I can recognize that melodies are intelligent.
The track seems quite professional, the only thing I dislike is that you hear too often the same lead sound from the beginning to the end.
Try, for example, to find another synth for making the lead on the second half of the song.
Keep on with the good work, mate.
Fire Walk With Me
Chemistry
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
18
Posts :
242
Posted : Dec 28, 2011 22:51
@Oni Katsu
if your talking about taking out the "blue monday" thingy no leave that. that's not what I'm saying. leave the whole song as it is. What I'm saying is take the song as a whole from that point and on and cut it, double kick stop/slap
dun..........dun/dun..........d-d-d-dun lol you know?
Let the people and the song know your in control. It will bring more energy.
I don't know if this is helping lol I'll try and find a example
