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New downtempo track (107 bpm)
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Ascension
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 03:17:12
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vector_0
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 16:36
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nice sounds!
I would say this though:
the first 3 min drag a little; but from 3:00 to about 4:30 i feel like it really heats up. maybe in the first 3 min either layer some more percussion, or just switch up your current percussion loops in 8 or 16 measure phrases.
and maybe at 5 min either have something else drop with it or change the bubbly atmospheric texture. this suggestion is a bit personally stylistic though, as maybe you don't really want a dramatic drop in your song.
don't take this too negatively though, because I think this is a really good track. I love the swampy dark tribal feel of it.
Keep up the good work!
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Ascension
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 20:52
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