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New deep house demo

pr0fane
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Posted : Aug 13, 2009 18:00:54
I know this isn't usually the forum for this kind of music, but I've made a laidback deep house demo, and some feedback would be greatly appreciated

Here's the first 3½ minutes. Thanks in advance




http://www.zshare.net/audio/64065594ffe46e3c/          DJ pr0fane (Iboga Records) | Multiphase
www.sunrisesupplies.com | www.iboga.dk | www.soundcloud.com/pr0fane
A.Rosengren
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Posted : Aug 17, 2009 16:50
I like it! Very laid back as you said. In my humble opinion i would evolve the chords that goes on through the entire track, perhaps doing just a slight adjustment in cutoff to highlight or hide them in the mix, depending what purpose you want to give them.

keep it coming!


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Outolintu
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Posted : Aug 19, 2009 19:22

hmmh, having problems with soundcloud. the tracks just don't start. clicking on the play button like a mad man but nothing happens!           "no one ever sweats on a plug-in" -moby
pr0fane
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Posted : Aug 20, 2009 10:08
Thanks Anders

Outolintu: Soundcloud works fine here - otherwise there's the zshare-link, where you can also stream it.           DJ pr0fane (Iboga Records) | Multiphase
www.sunrisesupplies.com | www.iboga.dk | www.soundcloud.com/pr0fane
Outolintu
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Posted : Aug 21, 2009 21:02
well, i don't know what's wrong with my browser settings but soundcloud is not working :/
z-share did and your tune sounds like proper deep house. keep 'em coming!
          "no one ever sweats on a plug-in" -moby
shellbound
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Posted : Aug 24, 2009 17:46
i agree with pretty much every comment made so far (here and on soundcloud). adding some slight variations to those chords (cutoff, anything) would really help. that little gap doesn't really add anything and just brings attention to itself. which is not a good thing in this case, since the tunes is supposed to be deep and hypnotic. i also think you should tame your high end. things are just too loud and too irritating. the deepness and warmth comes from the low end, which it seems like you have under control pretty well.

nice track. keep working on it.           https://soundcloud.com/dead-end-dance
https://soundcloud.com/shellbound
pr0fane
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Posted : Sep 17, 2009 20:15
Thanks for the feedback. I've finished the track with a friend of mine, and it has been sent out to some house-labels. A 4-minute demo can be streamed at Soundcloud:



          DJ pr0fane (Iboga Records) | Multiphase
www.sunrisesupplies.com | www.iboga.dk | www.soundcloud.com/pr0fane
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