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New Darkproject with first Track>>158bpm..plz Check it!
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Suloo
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Posted : Dec 3, 2007 10:08
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Suloo
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Posted : Dec 6, 2007 19:02
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Hmm..no one out there who wana say something?
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Quasimodo
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Posted : Dec 6, 2007 19:11
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Suloo
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Posted : Dec 6, 2007 19:54
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What bores you? Bassline/Kick...sounds or breaks?ok th long break sucks..i know..but please be a bit more precise..
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TAS
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Posted : Dec 6, 2007 21:43
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I´m no expert but I can try and say what I thought about it... remember, this is just MY OPINIONS... everything is a matter of taste and we all have different...
First 4min way to monotom, didn´t "happened" much... good "background sounds" but no god lead that would given the track more energy. Feels like I´m waiting for the track to "kick in" but it never happens...
The break in the middle... just 1 beeping sound for a very long time IMO... you should add more stuff there. Voice samples or something like that is always easy to do and don´t take much time at all...
2nd half of the track sounds like the 1st half.. wich makes it even more "boring" since there is nothing new in the track and you are still waiting for it to "kick in"...
You also use the same way to place the kick in almost every "short break" you have wich makes it to repetive...
Well... just my opinions.. and don´t listen to much on me... do your own thing and remember, as long as you think it´s good, then it is good. You shall always do the music for your own sake and not listen to much on others  We all have different taste!
Best wishes to your project! I thought it was good for a first try anyway! =)
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Suloo
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Posted : Dec 6, 2007 22:31
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Yer..very true..thx for your time..it really needs some kind of crazy story..more sounds and yer..i got your point..will be helpful..
cheers
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