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New dark heavy progg!
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Scenix
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Posted : Dec 16, 2010 05:40:00
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daark
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Posted : Dec 17, 2010 12:46
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sybos
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Posted : Dec 24, 2010 03:28
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I think you have the bass and the mix down.. the leads need work...They are repetitive and can be dissonant with the bassline...What gear are you using? Longer bars for the lead will help you fill in the gaps if you want to keep the current length.
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Dec 24, 2010 03:43
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@3.55 awesome D
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minus
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Posted : Dec 30, 2010 19:22
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pretty nice sound bro, production is also clean and some decent ideas, didnt like that tempo change at 4:23, breaks the flow for me, and maybe change the melodies in the ending part to a more logical progression,but pretty decent sound
bomz
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Dec 31, 2010 01:14
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disagree with minus in the part of tempo change ahahaha
but the trasition to former tempo is a bit... dunno man, work it more.. dont change back that sudden...
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Dec 31, 2010 01:16
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1 thing more... last part... only bass/kick is dark and heavy. .. :x
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