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New acid full on tracki !!!
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jap0
Pragmatix
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 17:57
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MARGHERITA
Master Margherita
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 18:20
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You never try to mix trance & candombe rythms from argentina ?
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jap0
Pragmatix
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Posted : Dec 28, 2004 19:58
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hehehe....
ey man, that is a god idea to check...
i going to try in the next track
salut !
and peace
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jap0
Pragmatix
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Posted : Dec 29, 2004 17:27
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Mike A
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Posted : Dec 30, 2004 11:55
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Your track sounds empty... Take for example 7:40, this should be the peak section of the track, and all you hear is kick, bass, 2 hihats, snare and one lead. You need more sounds, for example 5:22 sounds much better because it has more than just one sound.
Also lack of many effects, it sounds quite dry imo.
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jap0
Pragmatix
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Posted : Dec 30, 2004 20:16
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mike !
thakz for your review...
i didnt put more sound because my machine is very old, i have an athlon 750 with 256mb so i cant put all of things i like....
next week i going to buy a new machine... and i will try to make a track with more spacesounds...
i want to fly when i compose a track!!!!
thakx for the feedback brothers!
all of comments are welcomeeeee !!!
peace and goodvibe !!
japon -.-
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Dec 31, 2004 04:04
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hey bro.. i think this is good... but like mike sais its kinda naked one.. but the melodies are for sure killer... great one!!
keep on adding stuff to this one..
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Dec 31, 2004 04:04
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mayby cut it to a 7+min track? |
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Binaural_Beat_Lab
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Posted : Dec 31, 2004 05:25
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Very fun track man! I really liked it, nice beats, nice general composition. However, I wont repeat what everybody else said of naked track; But in general, make your track alot more danceable, to do that, add more beats, try adding maybe some congas...eres argentino! dale mas sabor latino! So groove it up a little, make more of an impact on the climax, you can add more melodies rising in cutoff for example on the peak, and then applying an lfo to the cutoff after the peak ends, something like that dunno. Remember also that you are making danceable music, dont make the people stop so much unless you actually spice up every break.
Well thats it.
I hope i was helpfull!:)
chao
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jap0
Pragmatix
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Posted : Dec 31, 2004 09:09
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jey friends !!
im very satisfied for your reviews , they are constructive critiques for me  and I like that this happens !!
It is very good for the artists, Because I feel that it makes them entrust more in what they produce....And it gives more batteries to creating and expressing our lives....
go the madmen go !! 7
salut!
very good topics and very good vibe!!
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lindseyp
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Posted : Dec 31, 2004 13:54
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What a great set of melodies. Like some have said I think the track needs more power in places, you seem to build up and then let it fizzle out which can be disappointing, but I don't agree that you need necessarily to put too much in there to get that power.
Well done.. Keep it up!
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