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new 145bpm killer track!bam bam bam
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Rukiwärsch
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 23:16:15
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aciduss
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Posted : Jan 8, 2011 06:10
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- Nice bassline but seems a little 'in the back'
- Vocoder is a little annoying
- Hihats are shy, quiet but kinda groovy
- 3:00 classic... nice... synths can get a little higher in level i feel.
- 5:35 feels empty, seems like someone got lazy at the end 
- 6:44 clone of 3:12
- 7:00 ok we all like squelchy lead but this is getting too much bro. You have to make some music too you know...
Nice idea but feels like you got lazy at some point and just used a lot of squelchy psytrance lead to fill the whole track. IMHO Lacks of punch and variation.
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Jan 8, 2011 15:59
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compressorized?
 I want a spare brain.... or 2. |
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Rukiwärsch
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Posted : Jan 8, 2011 16:20
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Vaultex
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 13:02
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Hi there Rukiwärsch, this is just an opinion:
- claps could be much more punchier, they sime a little bit hidden
- I like the bass pattern and the cymbals crash
- the vocoder gets a bit annoying because of being repetitive all the time... could variate with more different sounds
- from 2:58 to 4:04 its interesting, its nice good work : )
- the bells riff is a bit uninteresting... they just don´t feel natural to the music, the sequence is too much "squared"
- the whole track is not bad, but i think there is a lot of improvement to be made. In general I think you are in your way to get where you want.
- just a question: are you using compressors/dynamics fx in the track?
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Rukiwärsch
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 13:20
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