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Posted : Sep 28, 2010 18:08
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nice track man, liked it a lot, dont like that break you did at 3:11, keep the voice sample, but you drum entry is cheesy, mke that better, put some time into it, mm, maybe fade in drum roll? and a sweep and crash? 3:50 change melody a bit or introduce someother sounds,maybe make break come sooner, that lead sound, thing at 4:30, maybe use some distortion, fx on it, its too high too sharp,, and 5:10, bell lead entry, that lead too loud, even ones after that, have no patern, just rolling, maybe use phaser, flanger on it?and in end, you should slowly slow down engine, other than that the rest of the sound me like, nice flowz, decent works
bomz
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